Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your play on "Won/One" in the title and your Valentine-themed poem for this time of the year! Your "serenade" and "arias" metaphors plus your abundant use of alliteration added to the intensity of feelings. Miles of hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014

Thanks dear Joan for the great review, and your generous
accolades, always happier when you enjoy and visit...
You bring sunshine on my page every time....bless you!
Hugs Galore!!!!!!!!!!! Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 21-Feb-2014

Here's to a sun-filled weekend! Miles of hugs- Joan

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Excellent artwork where you vaguely see a violin. You would like to get a serenade, who would not? I will try and send one over to you.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014

Thanks dear Robina, for your thoughtful comments and
compliments, sincerely appreciated. Would love a
serenade from you anytime, and how dear of you to offer.
Thanks again...hope you are taking good care of you.
Best always, Ronni

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

How nice to see you, Ronni! What a fabulous blend of metaphors and personification. I loved enamored stars and moon's majestic parlor. Your unique style shines throughout and your poem will stay with me. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014

Well hello yourself Lou...great to see you too! Thanks
for enjoying and appreciating this presentation, and
lovely compliments. Grateful hugs. Ronni

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match.
Your words captured my attention from the first line to the last. I don't know who you wrote this poem they must be someone very special for you to express your inner self like this.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014

Thank you Sweetie so happy you enjoyed this dear. Know a
few special people this suits so well, names are not as
signifcant as the thoughts and affections that abide
with me and for them. Lovely to have your visit dear...
Blessings, Ronni

reply by misscookie on 21-Feb-2014

You're very welcome, have a blessed week-end.
Until next time.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Ronni - your post with this much emotion and heart always are a thrill to read. This is tender and sweet work, with a graceful flow I loved.
Excellent work dear One.
Thanks for sharing it.
Love
Maureen
xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you dear Maureen, happy you enjoyed and shared
your always endearing comments and compliments.
Love, Ronni xxxx000000

Comment from reconciled

Excellent

and infinity releases serenity's sigh of contentment wrapped in assurance of love's arms soul-y possessed.... guessed the poets muse. I....cant look at you ....I've squandered my yellow crosses at the village Inn again....forgive me someday soon.....love you Michael

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Ah well, whatever this translates to ever Awesome one,
thank you for the visit and endearing support.
Have a greateful sip of 'cyber coctail' and smile!
love, Ronni

reply by reconciled on 19-Feb-2014

PSSSSSSSSssssssssssssssssssss................-headshake-

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, stranger. I haven't seen you around much anymore? Missed you. After I finished my last novel, last month, they discovered I have cancer of the bladder and was off for a while. I think they got it all. I hope.

I loved your poetry as always. You are so tuned in to life and human feelings. "vibrant, euphoric hues, resplendently aglow
in love's harmonies, heart's bond sealed by
soul's kiss, splendorously suspended infinity"

A great metaphoric write. Take care, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Well hello Bob...what a nice surprise...been here with few
off times now and then. I'm glad the worst is over with
your Cancer, and hope you are feeling better again.
Thanks for your kind thoughts and lovely comments
on this presentation, always an endeared friend too!
Take care, stay well, best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love this beautifully worded poem, metaphorically magnificent in its delivery! It is a passionately woven work, expansively delivered in its expression! However I have a problem with a few words! Whether they're typos I'm not sure, I consulted the dictionary and could not find them: sernade, do you mean senata or serenade. Tremously: do you mean tremulously. Splendoursly: do you mean splendiferously? 1st line small f in oF. I'm sorry, it might help what is otherwise a good work! Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you for your most generous review, and especially on
the key words you questioned. They have been corrected and
changed to the perfectly correct ones you so kindly noted..
and the little typo on 'oF' to OF.. I sincerely appreciate
your extra effort in making me aware of them. Being
BiLingual, I do sometimes use expressions or words that
do not translate into the correct standard version. I
stant gratefully enlightened and make note for future writes.
Very glad you enjoyed the poem and delivery, and great
rating aside from few words needed correction. I always
welcome such candid comments, and aids in learning process.
Best wishes, Ronni

reply by royowen on 19-Feb-2014

You're welcome, my wife speaks 3 languages. so i can empathise. You did very well, most mono lingual can't speak their native tongue as well as you! Bless Roy.

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

This was a beautifully written poem. I loved the light mood of this poem. The line,

May life joyfully keep serenading you

was one of the lines that stood out to me. Beautiful flow of words. Nice job.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you for your wonderful review and gracious compliments
on this presentation. Always added happiness when certain
lines evoke such an affirming touch.
Best wishes always. Ronni

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

You certainly have a cascade of words here, all rushing and bubbling to outdo each other like the splashes from a waterfall. The alliteration helps the impetuous flow and leaves the reader breathless at the end. It is a lively gypsy serenade.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014

Thank you for your grand review and generous comments and
compliments. I am so glad you enyoyed the presentation
and your kind rating. Best wishes always, Ronni