Creative Whispers
A poet without inspiration16 total reviews
Comment from fionageorge
Oh, I can so relate to the words and sentiments expressed in this wonderfully creative and inspirational poem. Months I could not write a poem. My muse had deserted me... He seems to have returned this week... finally. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Oh, I can so relate to the words and sentiments expressed in this wonderfully creative and inspirational poem. Months I could not write a poem. My muse had deserted me... He seems to have returned this week... finally. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Hi Marijke,
It's amazing that on some days we can have words pouring out of us and on others there is nothing there. I'm SO glad to hear your muse has returned again! Looking forward to what you may write. In the meantime, Thank you for the lovely and outstanding six star review!
:o) Helvi
Comment from darla1977
Wishing I had another six for this beauty! This is wonderfully rhymed, and very clever! Congratulations on this fine piece!!!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Wishing I had another six for this beauty! This is wonderfully rhymed, and very clever! Congratulations on this fine piece!!!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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WOW! Thank you for believing this deserves a six. I am honored you feel that way. Even cyber sixes create REAL smiles. Thank you for the one you sent me! :o) Helvi
Comment from seaglass
This is a beautiful, whimsical poem and a bit of a paradox, as the plea for help to be creative is in itself creative, making the entire poem very creative. A very nice piece.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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This is a beautiful, whimsical poem and a bit of a paradox, as the plea for help to be creative is in itself creative, making the entire poem very creative. A very nice piece.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Hi seaglass, Thank you So much for the lovely compliment! I'm thrilled you enjoyed what I wrote. :o) Helvi
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Comment from Ernest McGeorge
I love this one. It's true that when inspiration comes to you it's like the words are not coming from you but an old master whispering in your ear. sometimes try as you may, you hear nothing. all the talking to your mind does not help. You captured this beautifully .great work, thank you
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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I love this one. It's true that when inspiration comes to you it's like the words are not coming from you but an old master whispering in your ear. sometimes try as you may, you hear nothing. all the talking to your mind does not help. You captured this beautifully .great work, thank you
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Hi Ernest,
Thank you SO much for the lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed my thoughts. :o) Helvi
Comment from Pili Pubul
Well , inspiration came full blast, great muse you have my friend.
I love the first stanza so much, and the whole poem, great style, meaningful
and very real imagery, we all can relate. Thank you for sharing. Pili
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Well , inspiration came full blast, great muse you have my friend.
I love the first stanza so much, and the whole poem, great style, meaningful
and very real imagery, we all can relate. Thank you for sharing. Pili
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Love it when My muse is working it makes poetry writing FUN!
Thanks for the wonderful review My Friend! :o) Helvi
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LOL. , I agree.. You are very welcome. my poet friend.
Pili
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of abcb rhyming
good alliteration in phrases like weary windows and vanquished from the very
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to oine
I really like the create the magic stanza in describing the creative writing process
I also like tickle me with thoughts
Brooke :-)
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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excellent use of abcb rhyming
good alliteration in phrases like weary windows and vanquished from the very
good use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to oine
I really like the create the magic stanza in describing the creative writing process
I also like tickle me with thoughts
Brooke :-)
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Brooke, Knowing you felt I did a good job writing my poem always leaves me with a smile! Thank you for the lovely review. :o) Helvi
