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23 total reviews
Comment from Diny
Don't know how I missed this one- Brillant!- Good to see you here again- THough I am not here often When I do stop in it is so sweet to see a familar face and name- hus dear one as Always- Di
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Don't know how I missed this one- Brillant!- Good to see you here again- THough I am not here often When I do stop in it is so sweet to see a familar face and name- hus dear one as Always- Di
Comment Written 09-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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What a treat to hear from you. Glad you popped in for a visit!
Comment from poetbear
This reminds me so much of Gungalo( our late friend and poetess Pam).
Great visual that compliments your words.
Reads and flows well.
I see the muses are with you.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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This reminds me so much of Gungalo( our late friend and poetess Pam).
Great visual that compliments your words.
Reads and flows well.
I see the muses are with you.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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The muses are always here...
Thank you poetbear!
Comment from xotic flotsam
Your impleading the muse reads passionately. I'm in the muse doldrums. I find your call becomes mine as well. Your spirit implores you to create paintings in my head with your words. And you have. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Your impleading the muse reads passionately. I'm in the muse doldrums. I find your call becomes mine as well. Your spirit implores you to create paintings in my head with your words. And you have. Thank you.
x
Comment Written 21-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Now that's exactly what I like to hear. :)
Thank you!
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My pleasure.
x
Comment from J. P. Egry
So much emotion here--even desperation perhaps that we all have, of hoping to write something really great or even just worthwhile. The generous alliteration adds to that feeling, as does the wonderful reference to liquid that provides a solid theme/cohesiveness to the whole poem. It is all very kinetic as well as soulful.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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So much emotion here--even desperation perhaps that we all have, of hoping to write something really great or even just worthwhile. The generous alliteration adds to that feeling, as does the wonderful reference to liquid that provides a solid theme/cohesiveness to the whole poem. It is all very kinetic as well as soulful.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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thank you J.P
Comment from Ronni
Ah well indeed, you most certainly are challengeing
your spiirt to create with words! Your 'words' here
are multifaced colors of ink from depths of every
source and sense possible in a mortal! Inspire
you? Seems inspiration was already in waves
of invocation and creation enough to fill an oacen.
Your last lines are stellar alone!
Love, Ronni
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Ah well indeed, you most certainly are challengeing
your spiirt to create with words! Your 'words' here
are multifaced colors of ink from depths of every
source and sense possible in a mortal! Inspire
you? Seems inspiration was already in waves
of invocation and creation enough to fill an oacen.
Your last lines are stellar alone!
Love, Ronni
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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I love you so much. Thank you!.
Comment from Marillion
Hi Jewell! This is beautiful and ethereal, my friend, and I recall your work always carrying that other-worldly atmosphere that allows one to sink into the poem, absorb its beauty, and being better for the experience.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Hi Jewell! This is beautiful and ethereal, my friend, and I recall your work always carrying that other-worldly atmosphere that allows one to sink into the poem, absorb its beauty, and being better for the experience.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Hi! Thank you!
Comment from emrpoems
Fantastic is what I call this poem. it draws the reader in to feel the emotion with which you write. The picture also has a powerful aura and together they make a captivataing presentation
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Fantastic is what I call this poem. it draws the reader in to feel the emotion with which you write. The picture also has a powerful aura and together they make a captivataing presentation
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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What a wonderful review! Thank you!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, poetic visionary, you did an excellent job writing this inspiring poem about the inspiration that is called for to create. i enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, poetic visionary, you did an excellent job writing this inspiring poem about the inspiration that is called for to create. i enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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THANK YOU!
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
'Dip
into my heart
Cause my mind
to bleed
in raw Truth'
One word...amazing..
Another few words..excellent! wonderful! superb..
Great Job! Loved it..Loved every line..
God Bless!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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'Dip
into my heart
Cause my mind
to bleed
in raw Truth'
One word...amazing..
Another few words..excellent! wonderful! superb..
Great Job! Loved it..Loved every line..
God Bless!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Deniz22
Dip
into my heart
Cause my mind
to bleed
in raw Truth
Prick
the skin of my soul
then beseech
for more
Sounds painful! I don't know whether to admire or call 911!
:) Nice work!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Dip
into my heart
Cause my mind
to bleed
in raw Truth
Prick
the skin of my soul
then beseech
for more
Sounds painful! I don't know whether to admire or call 911!
:) Nice work!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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911 can't help me! Thnx
