Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid rhyming couplets
what an adorable love story
I like how you show the physical manifestation of their love, like giggling, a blushing face, sparkling eyes
wonderful alliteration
what a great way to explain how Timmy and Tommy came to be :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014

Thank you so very much, Brooke. It seemed so long ago that I wrote a Timmy and Tommy poem, it was good to get back to it now. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xsx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

Well good for you Sandra! I am so happy to see you writing!

This is the very beginning of the Capers! What a great idea.

How sweet it is. The birth of Timmy and Tommy mouse. Good Job!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, my dear friend, for the lovely words and the 6 stars. I thought it would be a good idea to write something light and cheerful now, and it was fun bringing Timmy and Tommy back. :) xsx sandra

Comment from darla1977

Excellent

A cheerful, colorful piece with a cute storyline! Displayed wonderfully! Great rhyme all the way through! Love what you did with this! Great job!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014

Thank you so much, Darla! I am really pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

very beautifully written almost diamond like Her lovely eyes sparkled, she couldn't say, no, she knew that she loved him excellent piece

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014

Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I really am so pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xsx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a beautifully crafted children's poem! The narrative is smooth and flows so wonderfully well, its a lyrical romp from beginning to end. The tight rhyme and rhythm make it most readable, ideal to be read out loud, well done with this one! Blessings, Roy.

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014

Thank you so very much, Roy, for this lovely review of my poem. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

The nicest Valentine's poem I have read, Sandra! Your mice are a microcosm of perfect unity! In its simplicity yours is the archetypical story of love and romance with a happy ending!

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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014

Thank you so much for your lovely review, tfawcus, I am delighted you enjoyed it! :) Sandra.

Comment from His Grayness

Exceptional

Dear Sandra: I found this to be unusually delightful in all ways. The script is perfect rhyming poetry of course, but the story line is lighthearted, festive, and uplifting so well deserving a six star rating. BTW glad to meet you and will look for more of your work! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014

Hello, Vance, I feel I should call you, His Highness, not, His Grayness! What a lovely name. So nice to meet you too. I am delighted you enjoyed my poem, and thank you so very much for the 6 stars, you are most kind! :) Sandra xsx