The Devil by Firelight, Part 7
Jeremy makes a move27 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
OK Gretchen,
now we're getting somewhere. I know that I shouldn't harbor feelings of revenge, but I do. There is something in me that wants to see justice done, the way I think justice should be. Great chapter gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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OK Gretchen,
now we're getting somewhere. I know that I shouldn't harbor feelings of revenge, but I do. There is something in me that wants to see justice done, the way I think justice should be. Great chapter gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Tom. I think karma might come into play. Soon. I appreciate the six and the kind words. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
It's amazing that the first thing Jenny thinks about her rape is wondering how her brother is.
Women should have the right to have an abortion if that is what they want. Especially rape victims and very young molested girls.
I hope Jeremy will get away with Jenny. I am wondering what he will do next.
Well done... it's very suspenseful.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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It's amazing that the first thing Jenny thinks about her rape is wondering how her brother is.
Women should have the right to have an abortion if that is what they want. Especially rape victims and very young molested girls.
I hope Jeremy will get away with Jenny. I am wondering what he will do next.
Well done... it's very suspenseful.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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I doubt Jenny believes in abortion. She knew she wouldn't be able to throw herself down the stairs. To her life is life. Thanks for this. Gretchen
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For me, I wouldn't have an abortion either, but I support other women's decisions about their own bodies. By her character, it makes sense Jenny wouldn't have an abortion.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, thank you for sharing. I can't imagine how Jenny feels. Will Jeremy be able to use the knife? I wonder.
Jenny pulled her jeans on, a horrifying thought darted (pulled on adverb needs to be close to the verb)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Again, thank you for sharing. I can't imagine how Jenny feels. Will Jeremy be able to use the knife? I wonder.
Jenny pulled her jeans on, a horrifying thought darted (pulled on adverb needs to be close to the verb)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the edit. I appreciate the help and the feedback. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
Well, if he going use that knife on someone I hope it isn's Fin. It is good what happened. I wonder if Fin killed his father to trying to hurt him or his mother. I hope Patrick goes back to jail at some point.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Well, if he going use that knife on someone I hope it isn's Fin. It is good what happened. I wonder if Fin killed his father to trying to hurt him or his mother. I hope Patrick goes back to jail at some point.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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No doubt Patrick will land back in jail at some point. Thank you for this kind review. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
So Jeremy is making plans, he feels so guilty he didn't do anything to keep Jenny safe, but perhaps he might if Patrick tries anything again, Patrick is a control freak, I've come across them before, this is beautifully written Gretchen, how many more? Blessings Roy
Typo : Do to (a) rapist in jail?
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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So Jeremy is making plans, he feels so guilty he didn't do anything to keep Jenny safe, but perhaps he might if Patrick tries anything again, Patrick is a control freak, I've come across them before, this is beautifully written Gretchen, how many more? Blessings Roy
Typo : Do to (a) rapist in jail?
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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There are 12 parts in total. So 5 to go.
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a dreadful situation for these two innocent people at the hands of these thugs who care about no one but themselves. They must be terrified, but we all do what we can to survive and live through these times. I hope they get caught! A fine post Gretchen, always well written and readable, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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This is a dreadful situation for these two innocent people at the hands of these thugs who care about no one but themselves. They must be terrified, but we all do what we can to survive and live through these times. I hope they get caught! A fine post Gretchen, always well written and readable, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate it. Gretchen
Comment from JSD
Glimmers of hope and release here at last. I have hopes for Jeremy and his knife and possibly for Fin to turn on Patrick. Looking forward to the next one.
John x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Glimmers of hope and release here at last. I have hopes for Jeremy and his knife and possibly for Fin to turn on Patrick. Looking forward to the next one.
John x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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Thank you. Hope you're right. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
a gripping story ,But i have some confusion about why they were hiding It could have been made a bit clearer .I shudder to think abot the beirth of one more juvenile culprit...
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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a gripping story ,But i have some confusion about why they were hiding It could have been made a bit clearer .I shudder to think abot the beirth of one more juvenile culprit...
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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That will be in the next segment or two. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
This is one of my favorite stories in all the time I've been on FanStory, so I'm hoping that doesn't have anything to do with the kind of person I am. LOL. I mean, last week I posted a kind of religious poem. I don't write poetry, and not many would consider me reverent. Now, this week . . ..
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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This is one of my favorite stories in all the time I've been on FanStory, so I'm hoping that doesn't have anything to do with the kind of person I am. LOL. I mean, last week I posted a kind of religious poem. I don't write poetry, and not many would consider me reverent. Now, this week . . ..
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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He'll, Ric. I wrote it. What does that say about me. I see you as a man who wants good to triumph over evil. We'll leave it at that. Gretchen. And, thank you for this nice comment.
Comment from damommy
It's not Fin he needs to kill. It's Patrick. He'd better keep the knife hidden until he has a chance with Patrick. If he kills Fin, no tell what Patrick would do to them.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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It's not Fin he needs to kill. It's Patrick. He'd better keep the knife hidden until he has a chance with Patrick. If he kills Fin, no tell what Patrick would do to them.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2023
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I couldn't agree more. Patrick needs to go. Gretchen
