Comment from Patrick G Cox

Exceptional

Hi Peter,

Well said. Definitely not lost, just waiting for the reunion. I like your attitude and I must say it is good to see you back.

Patrick

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks very much, Patrick. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter

Comment from NadineM

Exceptional

This is a special poem, Peter. Made me tear up. Such a beautiful message of undying love and of a faith in God so strong it even alleviates the pain. Jinny is not lost, you're right. I loved the imagery in this poem. Thanks for sharing with me.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks very much, Nadine. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Wonderful words written Peter

You are right our loved ones care

For us all every day from heaven.

We all have a chance to go to heaven

To be with God and our loved ones and friends.

honey tree

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks very much, Annie. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter

Comment from Dirus

Excellent

Hi. Thank you for the nice read. Good description with good meaning. I liked this part the most.
Then, as I see your vision fade,
I think of sacred vows we've made,
that who'd be left must even smile,
because we're parted but a while.
Keep up the good work. :)

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks very much. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

A wonderful valentine tribute
and affirmation of your faith in the Lord
and his promises for the hereafter.

Nicely penned and clearly sincerely written :-)

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks very much. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid rhyming couplets
excellent use of iambic meter and enjambment that keeps the good cadence flowing from line to line and stanza to stanza
endearingly genuine expression of love and belief that the love will continue forever once a short time of being apart is over
a beautiful expression of devoted romantic love and devout religious faith
Brooke

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks very much, Brooke. Sorry to take so long responding, or maybe I replied elsewhere. Blessings, Peter