Little Poems
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Comment from sunnilicious
A man and his car. This poem came out well. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imagery. Clear imagery. Nice work. Good style that I must try.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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A man and his car. This poem came out well. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imagery. Clear imagery. Nice work. Good style that I must try.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2014
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Thank you Alicia. Yes, give it a try.
Comment from Nottoway
You did it well. I lament that I never had a "muscle car" but I imagined myself behind the wheel and beating that cat everyone wants to beat. And maybe "hugging that bikini clad" babe at the end!
Too bad the muscle care era is pretty much a thing of the past.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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You did it well. I lament that I never had a "muscle car" but I imagined myself behind the wheel and beating that cat everyone wants to beat. And maybe "hugging that bikini clad" babe at the end!
Too bad the muscle care era is pretty much a thing of the past.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thank you Nottoway. Yes, very too bad.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"The Best of the Breed" is an excellent poem with "loads of rhyme" good flow and good figurative language and imagery (adrenaline's creed). The structure is visually impressive.
Preston
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
"The Best of the Breed" is an excellent poem with "loads of rhyme" good flow and good figurative language and imagery (adrenaline's creed). The structure is visually impressive.
Preston
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you once again Preston.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I am definitely impressed with this new personally devised format.
The style is so effective andshows much thought and deliberation in its construction.
Whilst not a fan of cars and speed this poem caught and held my attention and left me feeling-wow!
This poem .gains my six star approval for its inventiveness and style.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I am definitely impressed with this new personally devised format.
The style is so effective andshows much thought and deliberation in its construction.
Whilst not a fan of cars and speed this poem caught and held my attention and left me feeling-wow!
This poem .gains my six star approval for its inventiveness and style.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you Shirley. I am most pleased!
Comment from rod007
This poem makes me think of my Calibra sports car before I got married. (the first time!) The excitement was overwhelming as I drove at 130 miles per hour on the M1 in London. Thanks for the memories of youthful joyous adrenalin flowing through me, although I was 32. However, I have always been an adventurer. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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This poem makes me think of my Calibra sports car before I got married. (the first time!) The excitement was overwhelming as I drove at 130 miles per hour on the M1 in London. Thanks for the memories of youthful joyous adrenalin flowing through me, although I was 32. However, I have always been an adventurer. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you rod. Do we ever grow out of it?
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I am afraid the spirit is there, but we are older, and too responsible to take the dare again!
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I am afraid the spirit is there, but we are older, and too responsible to take the dare again!
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I am afraid the spirit is there, but we are older, and too responsible to take the dare again!
Comment from Kingsland
You said judges in this poem. A Pontiac Judge was a very fast car in the annuals of muscle cars. I enjoyed reading this poem that takes me back to an era of fast cars and excellent music on the radio in those cars. This was an excellent piece of poetic artistry to have read and responded to... John
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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You said judges in this poem. A Pontiac Judge was a very fast car in the annuals of muscle cars. I enjoyed reading this poem that takes me back to an era of fast cars and excellent music on the radio in those cars. This was an excellent piece of poetic artistry to have read and responded to... John
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much John. I'm a Pontiac man too!
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Thanks so much John. I'm a Pontiac man too!
Comment from Capricorn30
Great concept of a 22&2 poem, Tom--love it!
You have once again inspired me;
I sense a keen interest in vintage automobiles--yes, we don't see the likes of them on the road anymore;
A vintage poem as we reflect on days gone by in today's technological environment--they didn't install computer systems into cars back then. These models were definitely in a class of their own--wonderful!.
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Great concept of a 22&2 poem, Tom--love it!
You have once again inspired me;
I sense a keen interest in vintage automobiles--yes, we don't see the likes of them on the road anymore;
A vintage poem as we reflect on days gone by in today's technological environment--they didn't install computer systems into cars back then. These models were definitely in a class of their own--wonderful!.
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you Margaret. No they don't make them like that any more.
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Thank you Margaret. No they don't make them like that any more.
