Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Vance - this has some powerful imagery and message within it. Looking at the bigger picture we can more easily see the vibrations throughout life.
Great work lots to ponder in this one.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

THANK YOU MARUEEN! It's nice to hear from you and I always love to get your perspectives on my work. Hugs! Vance

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

typo in title - Angles should be Angels
nice alliteration in magic of music
Lightening crashes - should be lightning
good alliteration in wind whistles
I love the musical imagery
God's blissful songs - add the apostrophe for possessive
a most thoughtful poem of faith :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

DEAR BROOKE: thanks so much for catching these transgressions and I have gone back to edit and hope all are now in specs. When it comes to the new and unfamiliar, I need more discipline! Thanks for being out there with that mirror dear friend! Vance

Comment from LorraineK

Excellent

In the Old Testament, King David dance in celebration of God, why not us, why not the angels? Loved you symbolism of lightning crashes, thunder, and cymbals of energy. Great poem, very well written. LorraineK

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

THANKS SO MUCH LORAINNE...GLAD YOU LIKED IT ... VANCE

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello His Grayness
It's so good to read a poem that is filled with the joy of dancing along with the
the Angels dance and sing
In grateful ceremonies of GODS blissful songs.

Gert

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

THANKS GERT..DELIGHTED TO HEAR FROM YOU. VANCE

reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Feb-2014

You are welcome Vance
Gert

Comment from Glasstruth

Exceptional

Music, the international language of soul. Once, dancing was consdered a sin, and maybe still is in some religions. How is that? Too much joy from authority figures must have cast a suspicious eye on it, but then how can it be ignored? As you write:

"In rhythms of nature that all may hear
Even in heaven joy embraces thunder
Lightening crashes cymbals of energy
And the wind whistles joyful refrains"

I can hear it. Wonderful! Les

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

LES...WHOOOO HOOO AND MANY THANKS TO YOU...REALLY ALWAYS GLAD TO SEE YOUR COMMENTS...SIXES JUST MAKE IT BETTER. CHEERS! VANCE

reply by Glasstruth on 02-Feb-2014

You welcome :)

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

I love this analysis of vibrations. No wonder we love the art form of dance. And no wonder every cultural in the world has some sort of drum. Great piece

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

SEAGLASS' GREAT POINT ABOUT THE DRUMS..YOU'RE RIGHT AND THANKS FOR THE KIND REVIEW: VANCE

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Comment from Darkhorse555

Exceptional

loved the the thundering beautiful image drawn here In rhythms of nature that all may hear Even in heaven joy embraces thunder excellent piece beautifully penned dear friend

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

THANK YOU SO MUCH DARKHORSE...ALWAY LOVE HEARING FROM YOU AND THE SIXER IS GREATLY APPRECIATED. VANCE

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

This is a very unique thought and cleverly written. Your words definitely paint a vivid picture in your readers mind. God loves you and so do i.

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

THANKS JANIE AND THE LOVE COMES RIGHT BACK TO YOU!! VANCE