To a son of God
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Comment from michaelcahill
I read this with my mind dancing and keen at first. Then I read it without trying to figure anything out and it made more sense to me. Kind of a feeling of being bombarded to the point of dullness where I am hearing concepts that I know are important but being a bit to thick to have a real response. Like the enormity of everything has made my brain something that exists in a thicker atmosphere than it should. Love the last line. The answer is no, of course. The question is why? Maybe, I dunno. mikey
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I read this with my mind dancing and keen at first. Then I read it without trying to figure anything out and it made more sense to me. Kind of a feeling of being bombarded to the point of dullness where I am hearing concepts that I know are important but being a bit to thick to have a real response. Like the enormity of everything has made my brain something that exists in a thicker atmosphere than it should. Love the last line. The answer is no, of course. The question is why? Maybe, I dunno. mikey
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thanks Mikey
Comment from LorraineK
Oh the temptations, the trials, the follies of man. Then there is our Savior who makes up all the difference. Loved your poem and your illustration. Lorrainek
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Oh the temptations, the trials, the follies of man. Then there is our Savior who makes up all the difference. Loved your poem and your illustration. Lorrainek
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from TAB_that's me
We all have a right to our artistic presentation. In my opinion though the misspelled words and abbreviation are difficult to follow.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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We all have a right to our artistic presentation. In my opinion though the misspelled words and abbreviation are difficult to follow.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from L.A.Matthies
Good job with your chosen style, very creative and consistent. I'm not sure if this was your intent, but I get a childlike feel from this piece that holds a nice appeal :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Good job with your chosen style, very creative and consistent. I'm not sure if this was your intent, but I get a childlike feel from this piece that holds a nice appeal :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Excellent many thanks
Comment from chasennov
To A Son Of God. 'ME.'
This is my dowt and worry,
But faith o faith u keep me safe.
When I rely on u I can see, but what do i see.
An unknown kingdom, a place of rest,
This poem is excellent. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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To A Son Of God. 'ME.'
This is my dowt and worry,
But faith o faith u keep me safe.
When I rely on u I can see, but what do i see.
An unknown kingdom, a place of rest,
This poem is excellent. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Excellent many thanks.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. No matter what one believes in, doubt is never good. I liked this verse best.
Dowt it goes about,
It clings in ur mind never giving u time to dowt the dowt.
Worry, it's always in a hurry,
Mixed with dowt: lethal cocktail is dowt and worry.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Hello. No matter what one believes in, doubt is never good. I liked this verse best.
Dowt it goes about,
It clings in ur mind never giving u time to dowt the dowt.
Worry, it's always in a hurry,
Mixed with dowt: lethal cocktail is dowt and worry.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from Deniz22
Well written! I hope the following will be helpful.
John 5:24 New King James Version (NKJV)
24 "Most assuredly, I say to you, he who hears My word and believes in Him who sent Me has everlasting life, and shall not come into judgment, but has passed from death into life.
This verse solidified my assurance that I belong to Christ. Especially note that Jesus speaks in the present tense when He says, "has eternal life." The best way to ally doubts is to spend time in the Gospel to get to know Jesus better and better. This allows us to "grow in grace" which saved us in the first place. God bless you, Dennis
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Well written! I hope the following will be helpful.
John 5:24 New King James Version (NKJV)
24 "Most assuredly, I say to you, he who hears My word and believes in Him who sent Me has everlasting life, and shall not come into judgment, but has passed from death into life.
This verse solidified my assurance that I belong to Christ. Especially note that Jesus speaks in the present tense when He says, "has eternal life." The best way to ally doubts is to spend time in the Gospel to get to know Jesus better and better. This allows us to "grow in grace" which saved us in the first place. God bless you, Dennis
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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many thamks
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After having read your profile (which I usually do first) I wonder if you have seen this?
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COOL ... I believe him ... thats why I love Jesus Christ !
Comment from 24chas
I think this was a creative and unique way of getting your message across. Well written and understood. Nicely done and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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I think this was a creative and unique way of getting your message across. Well written and understood. Nicely done and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good internal rhyming. Good description that draws a clear picture in my mind. Good complimentary photo followed by a thought provoking message.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good internal rhyming. Good description that draws a clear picture in my mind. Good complimentary photo followed by a thought provoking message.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from Jean Lutz
I read and re-read and what kept running through my head was pure soul or black spiritual -- magnificent mournful worship. Oh, that last line really did it for me!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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I read and re-read and what kept running through my head was pure soul or black spiritual -- magnificent mournful worship. Oh, that last line really did it for me!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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many thanks
