From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Blue Pencil Dream"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from DALLAS01
This was an interesting experiment. And it did remind me of stream of consciousness writing. I like the way it steps (excuse the pun)down the page. Combined with the art work I felt like I was in some kind of a maize.
Two observations: font is too small and as the sentences expanded I thought some of the rhyme was lost in transition.
Very creative.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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This was an interesting experiment. And it did remind me of stream of consciousness writing. I like the way it steps (excuse the pun)down the page. Combined with the art work I felt like I was in some kind of a maize.
Two observations: font is too small and as the sentences expanded I thought some of the rhyme was lost in transition.
Very creative.
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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THANKS DALLAS: really appreciated your kind and helpful review and the font is a real challenge as the page won't allow the work to fit as a stairway with any larger font so I'll have to get it done in less steps in the future. HIS GRAYNESS
