Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

Dear Robina: I really loved this one and thank you so much for sharing this. It is pregnant with emotion and poetic grip that really pulls a the heart. Well done! Vance

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I think most of us are close to our siblings. We can feel left out when one of our siblings die. But we will always be close to them. They are alive in part of our heart. But we often wonder why it was them and not us. Great work.

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

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Comment from Janie King

Excellent

Very interesting and thought provoking poem. It doesn't matter if one we love is in Heaven we can continue to love them. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

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Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Wonderful In, this poem inspired by a song.
Deep thoughts... We will never know how long we have to live and how healthy we are. I hope you have a long while, but we all have no guaranty.. And yes we meet Jesus and the angels and our beloved ones are welcoming us... Well written girl, well done!! Fia

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

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Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

Great lyrics. I'm a musician. These would be easy to sing and I can imagine music pretty easily with these words. Nice uplifting message. Well done. mikey

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

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Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, this is sweet and said... sweet knowing you will see each other no what matter and sad he is gone...your poem is very well written...and I sooooooooo love the picture...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great last part of the week, Ine.

reply by l.raven on 30-Jan-2014

HI Ine, you have one too!!!and many more!!!xxoo

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and Descriptive Scheme.



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I wouldn't do for you too(two)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great last part of the week, Ine.

reply by c_lucas on 30-Jan-2014

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I hope it will be a while,
before this happens.
Then we meet Jesus and angels.

Hi robina.

I believe we all want the same for you, I take it you lost a brother years ago.
Think of yourself now and heal your body. Mary

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014

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Comment from Matoshka

Exceptional

How wonderful you have expressed your emotions of love, for your brother and sister. To touch them always in spirit and in song. This is wonderful, Ine. Blessings, my friend.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great last part of the week, Ine. Thanks for the lovely six.

reply by Matoshka on 30-Jan-2014

So welcome and so deserving, Dear Friend. Blessings

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Jesus Said, "Whatever you loose on earth will be loosed in heaven" Matthew.18:19. A poignant, reflective refrain. I'm actually a songwriter in another life, and not sure how these lyrics would fit into a song! However as a poem it flows well with beautiful, descriptive language, seasoned with some strategic metaphors. Well done. Blessings, Roy.

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a great last part of the week, Ine.