Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am glad you were inspired to write song lyrics and hope you will set them to music. I have written several but I can't write music. Your words are quite touching and the repeats and your artwork selection add to the effect. Hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a nice and blessed Sunday, Ine

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

This was a very interesting poem. The message is pure, sweet, and innocent. The poem reads, and flows well. Innocence is what I see in this poem. Well written.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Inspired by a famous song, but did you really lose a younger brother? I know you tend to write about things you've experienced or read about.

Nice poem, Ine. Just one wee boo-boo:

What if I loose it all? - lose

Hugs

Av

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine. I will change that.

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

I was moved by your poem ,I lost two sisters young, very difficult to accept
Not sure what is the song you are referring to. Good poem and try to satay here for a long time. Hugs. Pili.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

reply by Pili Pubul on 31-Jan-2014

You very welcome. Thinking of you. Pili

Comment from krys123

Excellent

it is a beautiful poem and is a song goes into using better hook ( Something that grabs the listener so is not to forget either the music or the line/words).
I enjoyed reading this and I tried to listen to it but with no avail. Maybe you should've told us what type of song you are trying to mate it with. Thank you so much for sharing this with others.
Alex

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

reply by krys123 on 31-Jan-2014

You are so welcome Ine and you have a lovely weekend also.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

I hope you don't have to meet any angels yet either. Think in the present. And let what happens be for the best. God bless you. Hugs :)

I had a dream last night about meeting a ghost with a dog running around in an Egyptian pyramid. This poem made me think of that dream, which I can't really remember much else.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

Another precious piece of word art. Now you're writing song lyrics? Your talent continues onward. I Look forward to your next write.

Kat

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from fairy77

Excellent

Aww how beautiful. You've gotten great a the rhymes and it was lovely.Thanks so much for sharing this lovely piece friend. LIked Jesus and the angels:)Well done:)beth hugs.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Hey brother, indeed these are very lovely and inspirational song lyrics, I enjoyed reading them, God bless you. Hugs. lakeport....

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

reply by lakeport on 31-Jan-2014

your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport.

reply by lakeport on 31-Jan-2014

your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Wished you have named the song & singer you're referring to, as I'm not familiar. There is sadness when someone dies young, as your brother did. One of my nieces died when she was in her 20s, so it is hard. Your sister has been fortunate if she still has good health. They're always in our thoughts, loved ones who died young. You have the comforting thought of meeting again in heaven. In the line "What if I loose it all?" you mean "lose." judi

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely weekend, Ine.

reply by judiverse on 31-Jan-2014

You're so welcome. Another weekend already! judi