Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Be Gentle of Heart"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
61 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
I guess I'm a little late to the party... Congrats on winning the contest.
I can see why you had the most votes. Your poem was beautifully crafted,
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I guess I'm a little late to the party... Congrats on winning the contest.
I can see why you had the most votes. Your poem was beautifully crafted,
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much, for your kind words of encouragement!
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine philosophical piece of poetic art and a worthy winner of the septolet writing prompt! it has beautiful metaphors and the comparison between love and a rose is delightful!
thank you for sharing dear playinaround!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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this is a fine philosophical piece of poetic art and a worthy winner of the septolet writing prompt! it has beautiful metaphors and the comparison between love and a rose is delightful!
thank you for sharing dear playinaround!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you rebekka x, for such and kind and encouraging review!!
Comment from l.raven
HI Playinaround, this is a beautiful poem...I love where you put...thorns are there to protect ...not to harm...very well thought of...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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HI Playinaround, this is a beautiful poem...I love where you put...thorns are there to protect ...not to harm...very well thought of...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much Linda, for this kind and encouraging review!!
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Be Gentle Of Heart....this is a very well-penned poem. The sentiment it conveys is truly beautiful. The second stanza is so very insightful. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Be Gentle Of Heart....this is a very well-penned poem. The sentiment it conveys is truly beautiful. The second stanza is so very insightful. Excellent work.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words!!
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You're welcome, but the pleasure was mine.
Comment from chasennov
'Be Gentle Of Heart,' This poem you have created here, is quite descriptive in a few short words. Something we presume to be bad is actually good as in the thorns protecting the rose. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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'Be Gentle Of Heart,' This poem you have created here, is quite descriptive in a few short words. Something we presume to be bad is actually good as in the thorns protecting the rose. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your words of encouragement and kindness!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Lovinia
Hi playinaround
Sorry I missed this one. Congratulations on your win. I love the perspective you have .. always different to the expected. Lovely presentation.
A very clever thought provoking poem. What a generous person to consider the heart of one you must send away. Love is not always returned and this is sad. So easy to poke fun (use the thorns) of the lovelorn than to be kind. I ask myself what a different world it might be if we considered the feelings of others instead of mocking them. What a clever wit you have to consider the thorns as protectors rather than the aggressors. A brilliant septolet. So much and in so few words - no wonder you won. This obviously struck a note with the voters. It renews my faith in humankind when I see those who choose "No9t) harm. I wish I had a six for this both for the concept and clarity of expression. Hugs - Lovinia xoxox
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Hi playinaround
Sorry I missed this one. Congratulations on your win. I love the perspective you have .. always different to the expected. Lovely presentation.
A very clever thought provoking poem. What a generous person to consider the heart of one you must send away. Love is not always returned and this is sad. So easy to poke fun (use the thorns) of the lovelorn than to be kind. I ask myself what a different world it might be if we considered the feelings of others instead of mocking them. What a clever wit you have to consider the thorns as protectors rather than the aggressors. A brilliant septolet. So much and in so few words - no wonder you won. This obviously struck a note with the voters. It renews my faith in humankind when I see those who choose "No9t) harm. I wish I had a six for this both for the concept and clarity of expression. Hugs - Lovinia xoxox
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thank you Lovinia, for your wonderful insight and encouraging words. Always love your reviews!!
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My pleasure. I have to say, I've been enjoying your writing. :)))
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. It is easy to see why it was the winner. The two parts are in harmony forming a wonderful picture and message.
Barbara
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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This is a wonderful poem. It is easy to see why it was the winner. The two parts are in harmony forming a wonderful picture and message.
Barbara
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and kind review!!
Comment from pattipac
You creative Septolet is most deserving of first prize. Considering all the nuances of love and its effect on the lovers, it is wise to find a gentle a way of ending it. Thereby, hopefully, preventing thorny-reprisals.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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You creative Septolet is most deserving of first prize. Considering all the nuances of love and its effect on the lovers, it is wise to find a gentle a way of ending it. Thereby, hopefully, preventing thorny-reprisals.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your encouraging and kind review!!
Comment from sweetthanesue
what can one say simplicity and depth go a long way...few words run deep.a simple truth..the artwork is exceptional as too the verse...worthy winner...sue
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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what can one say simplicity and depth go a long way...few words run deep.a simple truth..the artwork is exceptional as too the verse...worthy winner...sue
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much sue, I am so glad you liked it!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Playinaround,
Marvelous piece of poetry in the form of Septolet Poem meeting all the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple, impressive and perfectly matching the theme.
Spontaneous and enchanting flow from top to bottom with lively imagery.
Superb!
That's why - Contest Winner!!
Congratulations!!!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Hello Playinaround,
Marvelous piece of poetry in the form of Septolet Poem meeting all the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple, impressive and perfectly matching the theme.
Spontaneous and enchanting flow from top to bottom with lively imagery.
Superb!
That's why - Contest Winner!!
Congratulations!!!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much RPSaxena, for this kind and encouraging review! And for the six stars!
