Speak To Me Sweet Jesus
Looking for a reason to believe26 total reviews
Comment from emrpoems
Great quatrains with abcb rhymes.
Fantastic presentation of this gorgeous picture and complimentary poem. Thoughts flow easily from one line o another and allows an enjoyable read
Speak to me Sweet Jesus
I'm ready to listen now
How I want to love you
Maybe I really don't know how --Very heartfelt words expressed here
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Great quatrains with abcb rhymes.
Fantastic presentation of this gorgeous picture and complimentary poem. Thoughts flow easily from one line o another and allows an enjoyable read
Speak to me Sweet Jesus
I'm ready to listen now
How I want to love you
Maybe I really don't know how --Very heartfelt words expressed here
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for these kind words about my trip with Dream and what I was looking for..Glad you enjoyed this makes my day !!!!
tk
Comment from krys123
An extremely wonderful and excellent piece of work. Your rhyming your rhythm your meter all of which is done very well. Your rhyming is done so well that neither your rhymes are forced, labored or strained. Your rhythm was also done very well and made it easy for me to read and understand your poem correctly.
On your storyline much as my own like chasing a rainbow but never seeing it end. Until one day it'll finally hits you and overwhelm you so much that makes you cry and humbles you so much.
Thank you so much for sharing this with others including myself. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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An extremely wonderful and excellent piece of work. Your rhyming your rhythm your meter all of which is done very well. Your rhyming is done so well that neither your rhymes are forced, labored or strained. Your rhythm was also done very well and made it easy for me to read and understand your poem correctly.
On your storyline much as my own like chasing a rainbow but never seeing it end. Until one day it'll finally hits you and overwhelm you so much that makes you cry and humbles you so much.
Thank you so much for sharing this with others including myself. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much Alex for the kind words and the exceptional rating Yes I am humbled soul too my friend!!
tk
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You are so sincerely welcome TK
Comment from TAB_that's me
TK you just keep riding your Dream until you find Jesus. He is in your heart, you just need to believe in Him as much as you do in Dream.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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TK you just keep riding your Dream until you find Jesus. He is in your heart, you just need to believe in Him as much as you do in Dream.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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AWE THANK YOU VERY MUCH TERESA I WILL TAKE YOUR WORDS TO HEART
HUGS TK
Comment from country ranch writer
You don't have to climb a mountain or get on bended knee, he can hear you anytime and anywhere you may be, he is all around you and is walking with you in your daily life. The choices you make in life are your path to choose he can not do it for you.Just open your heart to him and he will hear.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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You don't have to climb a mountain or get on bended knee, he can hear you anytime and anywhere you may be, he is all around you and is walking with you in your daily life. The choices you make in life are your path to choose he can not do it for you.Just open your heart to him and he will hear.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you CRW for your kind words and the green 6 Yes we all make our own paths and some foolishly walk it on their on own.
tk
Comment from Jean Lutz
At the church I attend we are blessed with a young pastor that keeps looking for new ways to tell the old, old story. He really delivered this morning. The link to our church is www.thewellumc.com We stream live, but then after a couple of days it is archieved. I think his blog is www.thepostmodernpastor.com or do a search for Matt Rawle. I heard your heart's cry in this piece.
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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At the church I attend we are blessed with a young pastor that keeps looking for new ways to tell the old, old story. He really delivered this morning. The link to our church is www.thewellumc.com We stream live, but then after a couple of days it is archieved. I think his blog is www.thepostmodernpastor.com or do a search for Matt Rawle. I heard your heart's cry in this piece.
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for you kind review and your invitation Jean I will look into that this afternoon as it is still morning here in the Islands
TK
Comment from hobopoet
This is a solid write, and full of longing. The emotion really bleeds through the lines, and that's good, because when you start tossing around Jesus's name in a poem, things tend to get over-the-top cheesy. You avoid that with simple, brute honest...and the poem is better for it.
Good stuff. :)
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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This is a solid write, and full of longing. The emotion really bleeds through the lines, and that's good, because when you start tossing around Jesus's name in a poem, things tend to get over-the-top cheesy. You avoid that with simple, brute honest...and the poem is better for it.
Good stuff. :)
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much And I do agree with you. One of the reasons I try and stay away from doing such writes..It seems after a while all the religious writes seem redundant and lose any message that they try and relay.. and quoting a bible verse just doesn't seem to get it for me anyone can copy past that thats why I try to never do it ..
tk
