Speak To Me Sweet Jesus
Looking for a reason to believe26 total reviews
Comment from mfowler
I've heard the frustration of the question many times Jesus: why can't I hear your voice? It's a bit of a universal. The top of mountain dream is a nice image for exploring the idea. I like your reference to the ego as a possible blocker. Probably is. Nice poem, good topic.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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I've heard the frustration of the question many times Jesus: why can't I hear your voice? It's a bit of a universal. The top of mountain dream is a nice image for exploring the idea. I like your reference to the ego as a possible blocker. Probably is. Nice poem, good topic.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting on this
TK
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha TK,
Your muse is back alive and well. You know I always like it when you write about my Jesus, love the way this rhymes and just flows so beautiful. Thank you for sharing your heart with me and others in this fantastic poem.
Aloha,
Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Aloha TK,
Your muse is back alive and well. You know I always like it when you write about my Jesus, love the way this rhymes and just flows so beautiful. Thank you for sharing your heart with me and others in this fantastic poem.
Aloha,
Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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AWE You share your heart with me as well my Lady G and I enjoy every minuet of it too
HUGS
TK
Comment from 24chas
A very honest and serious piece, Knight. I think you really laid it all out for everyone to understand your quandry. I won't pretend to have an answer and won't preach to you either, but good luck. I'm waiting for that voice too.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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A very honest and serious piece, Knight. I think you really laid it all out for everyone to understand your quandry. I won't pretend to have an answer and won't preach to you either, but good luck. I'm waiting for that voice too.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you much chas I don't think we are the only ones having that same problem my friend no not at all..Thank you very much for taking the time to read this and comment also
TK
Comment from Janie King
Loving Jesus can be hard when a person has really never been loved and don't really know how to love back. Thanks God he understands all of that. Very good poem. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Loving Jesus can be hard when a person has really never been loved and don't really know how to love back. Thanks God he understands all of that. Very good poem. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you so very much Janie for such kind words I do appreciate them and thank you for reading and responding as well
TK
Comment from l.raven
OH TK, every word in this poem just me to my knees...Like you I wonder if I am doing something wrong...I know I believe, but does he hear me...I want to find a favorite line but can't...they all say so much...a wonderful write...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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OH TK, every word in this poem just me to my knees...Like you I wonder if I am doing something wrong...I know I believe, but does he hear me...I want to find a favorite line but can't...they all say so much...a wonderful write...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Wow thank you so very much Linda What a wonderful reply you have given back to me I am sure He hears you my dear sometimes I think we just forget to listen at the right time Thank you so much also for that emerald green cross of 6
Hugs from your Tarnished Knight
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You are so very welcome TK...you earned it...Linda
Comment from GWinterwin
Very good poem with a picture that makes it all complete. Good word flow and rhyming as you talk to God. Talking and thinking of the things that happen in life, that make you wonder about finding God.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Very good poem with a picture that makes it all complete. Good word flow and rhyming as you talk to God. Talking and thinking of the things that happen in life, that make you wonder about finding God.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much GW and I agree so many things happen one wonders if they will ever find Him
TK
Comment from Pili Pubul
A very good poem my friend, yes some people talk and see all kinds of
Divinities and love ones that departed, an ex girlfriend of my son tells me she see him and talk to him, he tells her that he is close to me, she had talk to Jesus too, well explain to me why it never my son talks to me? Well if ever happens will let you know. Good style and meaningful writing. Pili
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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A very good poem my friend, yes some people talk and see all kinds of
Divinities and love ones that departed, an ex girlfriend of my son tells me she see him and talk to him, he tells her that he is close to me, she had talk to Jesus too, well explain to me why it never my son talks to me? Well if ever happens will let you know. Good style and meaningful writing. Pili
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Awe Pili trust me mine has been gone 14 yrs and I have not heard hide nor hair from him either..I guess some just have a better aura about feeling those things my dear I know I sure don't even though it does sound good on paper doesn't it
HUGS MY DEAR MS P FROM YOUR FRIEND TK
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Oh well, I think she is hallucinating ... She see him ? He was cremated... His body is ashes...no logic. Hugs sweet TK
Comment from boxergirl
This is a touching spiritual poem that you have shared with us. Each stanza speaks of your search and what you might be doing wrong. I liked the fact that this was a personal search for answers and I think you are on the right track. He is there already listening to your call to speak to Him. He loves you already - We can't earn his love. He gives it freely and all he wants from us is to love him back and to love others as well. 8-)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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This is a touching spiritual poem that you have shared with us. Each stanza speaks of your search and what you might be doing wrong. I liked the fact that this was a personal search for answers and I think you are on the right track. He is there already listening to your call to speak to Him. He loves you already - We can't earn his love. He gives it freely and all he wants from us is to love him back and to love others as well. 8-)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you so very much boxergirl for such a beautiful comment This could stand alone as prose that would deserve many a review
TK
Comment from nomi338
To search for Jesus is a noble quest. However the one to really search for is the father, called by some Jehovah. The scriptures say that if you search for Him, He will allow Himself to be found and that He is never far from us. The difference is that you must know who you really seek. Is it Jesus, or is it his father, the one who sent him?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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To search for Jesus is a noble quest. However the one to really search for is the father, called by some Jehovah. The scriptures say that if you search for Him, He will allow Himself to be found and that He is never far from us. The difference is that you must know who you really seek. Is it Jesus, or is it his father, the one who sent him?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you kind sir Nomi..Your insight is well taken as to whom one is searching for Myself I still am on the outside looking in wonder wonder wonder...
your friend
TK
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Thi is one of the most spiritual poems I have read on the site for quite some time.
I really like the personal and human feel your poem has as you stumble in the dark as most of us do.
Your very personal and heartfelt plea to hear your Saviours voice also strikes a strong chord with me
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thi is one of the most spiritual poems I have read on the site for quite some time.
I really like the personal and human feel your poem has as you stumble in the dark as most of us do.
Your very personal and heartfelt plea to hear your Saviours voice also strikes a strong chord with me
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Why thank you so very much seken..When I write one of these I do try and stay away from the norm and make them more personal than trying to convey a message to everyone.. If they do take away something that makes it all worth the while
TK
