haiku ( peach trees sweet blossoms )
A spring time delight!10 total reviews
Comment from rouskin
It really deserves to be a winner. Congratulations!
Good descriptive words that paint a clear picture so I can feel the impact of the words written. Thank you for sharing and have a great week
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It really deserves to be a winner. Congratulations!
Good descriptive words that paint a clear picture so I can feel the impact of the words written. Thank you for sharing and have a great week
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much for your kind review!
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned haiku, mystery poet;
Peaches not only produce a wondrous scent, I find their bright orange hue to be as attractive as their aroma;
"hints of luscious pie"--a fine conclusion leaving one desiring a slice of this tasty dessert!
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A well-penned haiku, mystery poet;
Peaches not only produce a wondrous scent, I find their bright orange hue to be as attractive as their aroma;
"hints of luscious pie"--a fine conclusion leaving one desiring a slice of this tasty dessert!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much for your review!
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You're welcome.
Congratulations on the win of the contest--well deserved!
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Thank you so much! It really meant a lot.
Comment from Nottoway
I really like this poem as it takes one from "birth" to "demise".
The beauty of the blossom to the savoring of the resulting pie.
Begnning to end.
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I really like this poem as it takes one from "birth" to "demise".
The beauty of the blossom to the savoring of the resulting pie.
Begnning to end.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mystery Poet
For some reason your poem made me think of Connie C, she is kinda peach sweet and luscious pie all in one. lol.
Splendid display image, though I'm always divided in these contests, some present with an image and some don't which makes it a little distracting when the images are perfect in themselves.
Your satori is particularly clever .... you've managed a picture perfect visual, and an awakening of the audial and olfactory senses ... and I'm drooling ... so the taste buds are tingling. Now I want to read out and pluck one of those juicy fruits. Your pure enticement in this poem will have you at the top of the poll here. Good luck. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo
PS: One nit: your 'trees' should show possession of the "sweet blossoms", thus I am pretty sure it should be trees' (plural) or tree's (singular).
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Hi Mystery Poet
For some reason your poem made me think of Connie C, she is kinda peach sweet and luscious pie all in one. lol.
Splendid display image, though I'm always divided in these contests, some present with an image and some don't which makes it a little distracting when the images are perfect in themselves.
Your satori is particularly clever .... you've managed a picture perfect visual, and an awakening of the audial and olfactory senses ... and I'm drooling ... so the taste buds are tingling. Now I want to read out and pluck one of those juicy fruits. Your pure enticement in this poem will have you at the top of the poll here. Good luck. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo
PS: One nit: your 'trees' should show possession of the "sweet blossoms", thus I am pretty sure it should be trees' (plural) or tree's (singular).
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Sounds like a crush! Very sweet. Thank you so much for the lovely review.
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Congratulations on your joint win with Val. There were a few goodies for your to compete with. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
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Thank you so much! It really meant a lot to me.
Comment from l.raven
oh so very true...Spring is in the air and everything starts to grow...you can smell the peach tree and light up the oven...Pies!!! very well written
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oh so very true...Spring is in the air and everything starts to grow...you can smell the peach tree and light up the oven...Pies!!! very well written
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
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Thanks for your review!
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you are soooooooooo welcome...xxoo
Comment from Janet Foor
peach trees sweet blossoms
lend fragrance to spring time air
hints of luscious pie
Nicely done. Peach blossoms are sweetly a hint of things to come. Good luck in the contest.
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peach trees sweet blossoms
lend fragrance to spring time air
hints of luscious pie
Nicely done. Peach blossoms are sweetly a hint of things to come. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much!
Comment from BeasPeas
Peaches! My favorite! and the reward is the pie. Your haiku is creative and different from the usual. Image is gorgeous. All lines work together and flow nicely.
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Peaches! My favorite! and the reward is the pie. Your haiku is creative and different from the usual. Image is gorgeous. All lines work together and flow nicely.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much!
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Haiku! The first two lines flowed and connected well. The last line put this the poem all together.
The artwork is perfect and enhanced the read.
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Excellent Haiku! The first two lines flowed and connected well. The last line put this the poem all together.
The artwork is perfect and enhanced the read.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Cajungirl
Peach Pie topped with vanilla ice cream sounds real good. LOL
Your Haiku has the correct line and syllable count per line. The picture chosen is perfect. I enjoyed the read. Best of luck in the contest.
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Peach Pie topped with vanilla ice cream sounds real good. LOL
Your Haiku has the correct line and syllable count per line. The picture chosen is perfect. I enjoyed the read. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Domino 2
Very nice artwork and colour presentation.
My only nit-pick is you repeat 'peach' when so few syllables are available. Maybe something like, in last line:
'juicy pie to come'
Good luck, Ted
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Very nice artwork and colour presentation.
My only nit-pick is you repeat 'peach' when so few syllables are available. Maybe something like, in last line:
'juicy pie to come'
Good luck, Ted
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much for the kind review and the great tip!
