From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The theatre of reality"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from tbacha58
When the warm, soft curtains of Hope
Drop silently at last in the dark theatre of reality
The silence of truth screams its last goodbye to love
And loneliness commands all consciousness
All the lights of creativity are now dark
All the seats of inspiration now are empty
And you are now alone in the wilderness of silence
To go now to the stage of wishes and sing to the
Audience of nothingness
Oh Vance, this poem took m y breath away, your lonely spirit and soul
reached to the end of the world. What a beautiful sad sad poem. Yet I do feel so much with your loneliness, we all do pass through the aloneness, heartfelt felt . Much love Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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When the warm, soft curtains of Hope
Drop silently at last in the dark theatre of reality
The silence of truth screams its last goodbye to love
And loneliness commands all consciousness
All the lights of creativity are now dark
All the seats of inspiration now are empty
And you are now alone in the wilderness of silence
To go now to the stage of wishes and sing to the
Audience of nothingness
Oh Vance, this poem took m y breath away, your lonely spirit and soul
reached to the end of the world. What a beautiful sad sad poem. Yet I do feel so much with your loneliness, we all do pass through the aloneness, heartfelt felt . Much love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Hi Terry!!! So glad to hear from you and hope you are well and enjoying life and time with your family. xoxox and hugs Vance
Comment from lakeport
The theatre of reality, ineed that brings back some memories, I was in two theatre plays.a beautiful expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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The theatre of reality, ineed that brings back some memories, I was in two theatre plays.a beautiful expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Hi Lakeport and thank you so much for your kind review. I'm always eager to see your responses to my work. Best regards and blessings to you dear friend! Vance
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your welcome,Lakeport.
Comment from adewpearl
scream/command - strong verbs add to the power of your poem
effective imagery such as the soft curtains of Hope
compelling expression of intense emotion
good consonance of L sounds in alone in the wilderness of silence
Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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scream/command - strong verbs add to the power of your poem
effective imagery such as the soft curtains of Hope
compelling expression of intense emotion
good consonance of L sounds in alone in the wilderness of silence
Brooke
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Thank you Brooke: your feedback is always precious and truly appreciated: Vance
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi,His Grayness,
"The Theatre of Reality" is a good free style poem written in good figurative language and imagery (warm,soft curtains of hope). It has good flow and structure.
Preston
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Hi,His Grayness,
"The Theatre of Reality" is a good free style poem written in good figurative language and imagery (warm,soft curtains of hope). It has good flow and structure.
Preston
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Preston: Many thanks...much appreciated! Vance
Comment from Darkhorse555
amazing picture in words right here When the warm, soft curtains of Hope Drop silently at last in the dark theatre of reality very beautifully penned piece dear friend
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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amazing picture in words right here When the warm, soft curtains of Hope Drop silently at last in the dark theatre of reality very beautifully penned piece dear friend
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much dear friend Darkhorse: I really appreciate your encouragement here and so glad to see your responses to my work ... I shall return the favors to be sure!! Vance
Comment from PoeticXscape
Not all theatres have to be haunted by yesteryears ghosts but all probably are. Remember the show must go on. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Not all theatres have to be haunted by yesteryears ghosts but all probably are. Remember the show must go on. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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DEAR PoeticXscape...really appreciate your review here and always appreciate seeing your comments. HIS GRAYNESS..Vance
Comment from Glasstruth
This has a surreal and elusive feel. An "Audience of nothingness' at first baffled me. Thought the theatre was empty... then realized maybe it's an imaginary one. You write that the seats are empty. Now from your imaginary reviewer I give it five thumbs up! Les
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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This has a surreal and elusive feel. An "Audience of nothingness' at first baffled me. Thought the theatre was empty... then realized maybe it's an imaginary one. You write that the seats are empty. Now from your imaginary reviewer I give it five thumbs up! Les
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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THANKS LES: I was thinking about this for the contest but missed the date so posted it anyway...thanks for the great review VANCE
