Women at War
Vivian Bullwinkle - sole female survivor..31 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
What a story of heroism!
Excellent use of abab rhyming
strong action verbs add drama to this tragic scene
good alliteration in waves washed
and in bastard brutes
This is a compelling story poem. Brooke
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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What a story of heroism!
Excellent use of abab rhyming
strong action verbs add drama to this tragic scene
good alliteration in waves washed
and in bastard brutes
This is a compelling story poem. Brooke
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Oooh, thou hast made my day. It was hard to bring it together - wish I could win just one contest. Thank you darling girl. :-)
