Fan $tory Golddigger
not alway$, but $ometime$21 total reviews
Comment from jadapenn
Yeah, yeah. Not all Fanstorians are blessed to be retired and sit reviewing 22/7. Now what happened to your top dollar?
Lol. You said your piece well. But here you need to be dedicated and take the good with the bad. luv jada
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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Yeah, yeah. Not all Fanstorians are blessed to be retired and sit reviewing 22/7. Now what happened to your top dollar?
Lol. You said your piece well. But here you need to be dedicated and take the good with the bad. luv jada
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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I agree and believe me, I've done my share of two-centers. Thanks!
Comment from Paddywack
Loved it! Honest, true and funny! Is it just me, or are others staggered by some of the reviews of pretty average fare? I'm put off reviewing some work that's already been given five and six stars, because everybody can't be wrong - it must be me, I'm obviously missing something!
Well worth reading for 42 cents.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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Loved it! Honest, true and funny! Is it just me, or are others staggered by some of the reviews of pretty average fare? I'm put off reviewing some work that's already been given five and six stars, because everybody can't be wrong - it must be me, I'm obviously missing something!
Well worth reading for 42 cents.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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I think many on the site are here for companionship and could not care less about spag. Others either tear their hair out over spag or learn to adapt. I really try to hear what the person is saying and respond accordingly. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from Sueellen11
Sadly this is true there re many in it for the funny money,,, I in turn will review all the works that come my way and most are for two cents,, I never have the funny money to get my work promoted hence I can't get review as I have been told by many they don't review if not promoted. It hard for new comments to get a head,, great write well done blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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Sadly this is true there re many in it for the funny money,,, I in turn will review all the works that come my way and most are for two cents,, I never have the funny money to get my work promoted hence I can't get review as I have been told by many they don't review if not promoted. It hard for new comments to get a head,, great write well done blessings sueellen
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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I was on the site for 3-4 months before I picked up on how the system works. It has it's crass side but Tom has to make a few real dollars himself.
I suggest you take a break from the two centers for a bit and go for the gold for a while. Then publish your stuff with enough coin to make it worth the while of reviewers. Understand, many can only make due in this manner as they cannot afford to pay real money. And it's hard work to review a bunch of works as you must try to give an honest appraisal of the writing.
And then some seem to always be writing and never reviewing to earn enough to put some money on their own works. Thanks for writing this and I hope you do well on FS. Dennis
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha - I KNOW it's not always true, since you have reviewed for me, and I rarely can afford more than a treasure chest certificate!
This is adorable! Very nicely done satire. :)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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Hahahaha - I KNOW it's not always true, since you have reviewed for me, and I rarely can afford more than a treasure chest certificate!
This is adorable! Very nicely done satire. :)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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You're right, I've done my share of two centers and enjoyed many of them. I do get a bit annoyed with those who write all the time and never put any goodies with their work. I think you are always a good read but I don't always comment for various reasons. Anyway, thanks for reading my junk and commenting! Dennis
Comment from Glasstruth
LOL. That's the problem with this site. It's all about the money. Still, I get some great reviews that help correct my writing. Wish it was based on quality. I admit I go for the ratings too. It's addictive. Write on! Les
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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LOL. That's the problem with this site. It's all about the money. Still, I get some great reviews that help correct my writing. Wish it was based on quality. I admit I go for the ratings too. It's addictive. Write on! Les
Comment Written 21-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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Hi Les, thanks for reading and commenting. Whatever faults FS has we have to say it works for most. I saw in the news that atheists are forming "churches" in England and it's so popular there that they want to expand to America. Guess what their first move is? They plan to raise thousands of dollars to fund the expansion. So I guess they won't be able to honestly say anymore that churches are all about the money. My point is that unless Tom was making a buck there would be no FS. Sorry to go on ... thaNKS AGAIN, dENNIS
Comment from emrpoems
nice one and you got it off your chess. I too don't like very long poems but sometimes you take a glance and because it is interesting you keep on reading.
Got a six star rating for being short and sweet and funny
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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nice one and you got it off your chess. I too don't like very long poems but sometimes you take a glance and because it is interesting you keep on reading.
Got a six star rating for being short and sweet and funny
Comment Written 21-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014
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Why thank you, emrpoems, and I agree re long poems. "short and sweet and funny" a wonderful description of me! Thank you! LOL
Comment from rama devi
It's a good tongue in cheek satire and I think a lot of fanstorians will either giggle at it and nod their heads or maybe go run and hide in a corner in shame. *wink*
Good bouncy beat and rhyming.
The flow is good but in this line, I felt like one more syllable would give it smoother flow:
So could you, at least, write something funny?
Maybe try:
So could you, please, at least write something funny?
I like the consonance of F between FS mess and confess. Clever!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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It's a good tongue in cheek satire and I think a lot of fanstorians will either giggle at it and nod their heads or maybe go run and hide in a corner in shame. *wink*
Good bouncy beat and rhyming.
The flow is good but in this line, I felt like one more syllable would give it smoother flow:
So could you, at least, write something funny?
Maybe try:
So could you, please, at least write something funny?
I like the consonance of F between FS mess and confess. Clever!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Thanks, I will employ your suggestion forthwith also asap! Thanks friend. Dennis
Comment from ravenblack
Don't worry about it. Everyone does it from time to time. I appreciate your humorous candor and will be sure to let you know the next time I post some haiku.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Don't worry about it. Everyone does it from time to time. I appreciate your humorous candor and will be sure to let you know the next time I post some haiku.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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:) thanks for understanding...
Comment from MissMerri
Hahahahaha. Well, truth is always a beautiful thing. But I wish you could have put at least a dollar on this. You know you'd get a lot more reviews, don't you? I enjoyed the humor, the fine rhymes and excellent meter. It was fun to read for sure. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Hahahahaha. Well, truth is always a beautiful thing. But I wish you could have put at least a dollar on this. You know you'd get a lot more reviews, don't you? I enjoyed the humor, the fine rhymes and excellent meter. It was fun to read for sure. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Awww, you're just saying that 'cause it's true! No, because you are you and so aptly named! Thank you! Dennis
Comment from l.raven
HI Dennis, You are such a nut!!! LOL...I'll see what I can come up with...LOL...I think you will find a lot of people in here that can sooooooooooo relate to this poem...gotta love this one...very well thought of I think...LOL...Luff Ya Linda xxoo
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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HI Dennis, You are such a nut!!! LOL...I'll see what I can come up with...LOL...I think you will find a lot of people in here that can sooooooooooo relate to this poem...gotta love this one...very well thought of I think...LOL...Luff Ya Linda xxoo
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Thank you lovely Linda. Tis but sweet pain to be called a "nut" by you. Some live for stars; I for xxxOOOO! LOL
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LMAO!!! xxxooo
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I live when you laff! :)
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I love when you smile... LOL...
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which I am now doing...:)
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smiling...back...xxoo
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I shall continue to smile though I must this communication cease...for a time. :) Sleep tight.
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You have sweet dreams...good-night Dennis...xxoo
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good night to you too and sweet dreams as well. :)
