Harry's So Worthwhile
Four quatrains in iambic tetrameter, rhyming ab,ab.18 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I loved the art work and words and everything about this poem Peter.
Having a baby is the beginning of
A very busy life as parents.
The picture is wonderful and this baby
Will love his parents as well as they will love him.
Annie
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I loved the art work and words and everything about this poem Peter.
Having a baby is the beginning of
A very busy life as parents.
The picture is wonderful and this baby
Will love his parents as well as they will love him.
Annie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Peter,
Wonderful form of rhyme and metre (Damn, I wasn't going to provide such superfluous comment). He looks like a cunning little beggar. LOL In spite of my advanced years compared to you, I am still waiting for my bone idle grandsons to get off their backsides, get married and produce another generation.
Reg
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Dear Peter,
Wonderful form of rhyme and metre (Damn, I wasn't going to provide such superfluous comment). He looks like a cunning little beggar. LOL In spite of my advanced years compared to you, I am still waiting for my bone idle grandsons to get off their backsides, get married and produce another generation.
Reg
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Harry is so worthwhile...............................
What a joyful poem........babies are so beautiful and innocent
Well done..............................God bless
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Harry is so worthwhile...............................
What a joyful poem........babies are so beautiful and innocent
Well done..............................God bless
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, Jenny, for your caring comments. Peter
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Harry is adorable and so is Mommy, Daddy and the poem Peter.
It's wonderful Jinny was there to enjoy him for a while. Well done. Looks like his question would be, "Well what do you think?" xxxNancy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Harry is adorable and so is Mommy, Daddy and the poem Peter.
It's wonderful Jinny was there to enjoy him for a while. Well done. Looks like his question would be, "Well what do you think?" xxxNancy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Yes, you've probably interpreted the question in his eyes that his lips can't yet say. Thank you for your lovely comments, Nancy. Peter
Comment from words
Such a charming poem, Peter.
You are right, having a baby does cause one to re-arrange one's schedule.
Great use of form.
Always a pleasure to read you, Peter.
Hugs, your fan, d
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Such a charming poem, Peter.
You are right, having a baby does cause one to re-arrange one's schedule.
Great use of form.
Always a pleasure to read you, Peter.
Hugs, your fan, d
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Thank you, Diane, more than I can say at the moment. Hugs, Peter
Comment from NadineM
This is quite adorable, Peter. Both the story of Harry and his antics, plus the photo. Great rhyming and alliteration.
Babies are wonderful little beings with so much energy and wonder in their eyes! God gave them to us to renew our strength and energy for the latter part of our lives, I think. Just when we're tiring and losing hope, a little life comes into ours and shines new light.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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This is quite adorable, Peter. Both the story of Harry and his antics, plus the photo. Great rhyming and alliteration.
Babies are wonderful little beings with so much energy and wonder in their eyes! God gave them to us to renew our strength and energy for the latter part of our lives, I think. Just when we're tiring and losing hope, a little life comes into ours and shines new light.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely words of appreciation, Nadine. I hope you managed to hear the song embedded below; I sing it a lot these days. Blessings, Peter
Comment from His Grayness
Peter; CONGRATULATIONS ON A BEAUTIFUL WORK AND A BEAUTIFUL GRANDSON! THE MUSIC WAS VERY WELL DONE AND VERY IDEAL FOR THIS MESSAGE AS WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING A MOVING AND DELIGHTFUL WORK. VANCE
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Peter; CONGRATULATIONS ON A BEAUTIFUL WORK AND A BEAUTIFUL GRANDSON! THE MUSIC WAS VERY WELL DONE AND VERY IDEAL FOR THIS MESSAGE AS WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING A MOVING AND DELIGHTFUL WORK. VANCE
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Thank you, Vance, for your great comments. Peter
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of abab rhyming
nice proximate rhyme of young/some
nice touches of alliteration
He is a little sweetheart, and his parents look justly delighted with him :-)
I love your celebratory tone, and what in this world merits more celebration than a new life?
Brooke
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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solid use of abab rhyming
nice proximate rhyme of young/some
nice touches of alliteration
He is a little sweetheart, and his parents look justly delighted with him :-)
I love your celebratory tone, and what in this world merits more celebration than a new life?
Brooke
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Thank you, dear friend. You caught my mind just right. Jinny was so delighted with Harry, who giggled when she tickled him, and then poked her. She could not sit up or cuddle him, but he made those moments in her life so worth while. I can't write any more.
