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Hi, Ricky1024,
"Although" is a creative free style poem with an interesting structure and original figurative language and imagery.(another light more powerful than fright). It has flow and some useful rhyme.
are/am then/an therpized not in dictionary.com
joaked/joked
Preston

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Try this on... 4...SIZE!!!
"Its all either bull-shit or "Spoctologicall, spoctological, logically, logical or un-logical!
Logical?
Tee, he, he, heeeee!!!!@
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Excellent

damn dude ten minutes of Eastern standard time produces gold for you...ah ha....I was sleeping and woke up with this movie playing on the tv....don't remember the name...it was half way over....about a guy who survived a terrible plane crash....everyone died but him.....and how the memories and sense of guilt I suppose haunted him...Jeff Bridges starred in it....I believe....real sorry about ....your family....I had one once too. Great read bro....love Michael

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Thanks for that and check out my review on you and this piece of grief. And always remember these words..."When you have your first, protect, inspect the friends no matter the age now read and turn the damn pa

























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All I Want for Christmas... by Ricky1024
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"Christmas is a time of needed sharing of love, faith,
appreciation..
Of hope, and future admiration's.
From Hot-chocolate kisses to your woman or man to a
simple gift to show your forever love like only you can...
...
"Appreciate your life and those who mean the most along
with what our creator has done 2013 + years later the most!!!
Now share my gift to all of you!!!

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"All I want for Christmas."
"I want NOT, NEED nothing...
No Christmas tree of pine nor decorations hanging on a vine!
No ornaments of shiny delight that trickle like magic in the
dark of night...
Nor beautiful woman for one whom is forever alone on a Saturday
night...
...
"No Ferrari, Mustang, or Corvette{had that}you can bet!
No slot machine filled with coins if you know what I mean!"
...
"No hot-chocolate kisses or Hershey Bar!
Nor sugar or candy cane or sleigh ride to guide...
No Santa, nope not for me or toy car from "Radio Shack" Mack!"
...
For all I want for Christmas God is my little boy *Jason back...

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*Jason Richard Smrkovsky is an angel...
Born on November 5th, 1984 a suppossed
{according to my late wife Carolyn} impossible.
Died tragically on March 31st, 2003.
{Atlantuic City Medical and Trauma Hospital.}
according to the staff nurse...
"The pictures of Jason's brain damage were the
worse that this facility had ever seen."
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"Jason's my gift through the writing of Christ to you
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Each and every time I lose a piece of me but I will never, EVER, stop.
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reply by reconciled on 16-Jan-2014

I don't have any children....if I were to have been blessed with a son.....I would have loved him with my whole life...Jesus man....I am seeing now....still I have a ....fraction of hope of reconciliation here....you have to wait until heaven calls home......that's why you tried so many times......but you cant because....you want to make sure ...you enter the right gate. Ricky...its not your fault....and they wait for you....loving you still....but you are here for reason....live it...prove your love for them with a life they witness even now, with pride....love-