Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 138 "Bliss"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from sunnilicious
Well, that is some classy rhyming. And funny thing, it does tell a story. Nice story in a two word poem. Creative. Excellent visual imagery. Great!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Well, that is some classy rhyming. And funny thing, it does tell a story. Nice story in a two word poem. Creative. Excellent visual imagery. Great!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you Alicia. It might majestic a good poster.
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Definitely
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo again to complement this tiny poem. I liked the title and the poem itself. So much can be said in two words. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Excellent photo again to complement this tiny poem. I liked the title and the poem itself. So much can be said in two words. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you Ine. I appreciate your appraisal.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
It's always a pleasure to review your poetry and one never knows just what to expect-part of the appeal really.
See it's not so hard to write two plus words.LOl.
Your internal rhyme was quite an achievement and slips so easily from the tongue.
A lovely image.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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It's always a pleasure to review your poetry and one never knows just what to expect-part of the appeal really.
See it's not so hard to write two plus words.LOl.
Your internal rhyme was quite an achievement and slips so easily from the tongue.
A lovely image.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you Shirley. Just experimenting. This could be a nice poster
Comment from rod007
Two solitary words but they conveyed the meaning, good job. A great internal rhyme. The less words, sometimes the better, with the picture it gives the piece a simple delightful meaning. Well done.
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Two solitary words but they conveyed the meaning, good job. A great internal rhyme. The less words, sometimes the better, with the picture it gives the piece a simple delightful meaning. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you rod. I could probably sell this to a poster company.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
You expect full credit for two words? Seems sort of lazy to me.Two word rhymes go through my head all of the time. Bliss at twilight - maybe if you are in a meditative state.
Preston
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
You expect full credit for two words? Seems sort of lazy to me.Two word rhymes go through my head all of the time. Bliss at twilight - maybe if you are in a meditative state.
Preston
Comment Written 16-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Thanks you Preston. You should post one. What, not credit for impact of composition, or clarity?
Comment from Capricorn30
Yes, you indeed expressed a great message in so few words;
Your poem and photograph has me longing for the days of summer--can't wait!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Yes, you indeed expressed a great message in so few words;
Your poem and photograph has me longing for the days of summer--can't wait!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Thanks Margaret. My very thoughts too.
Comment from emrpoems
Twilight Delight These two words say all that needs to be said and forms a vivid picture in the mind about twilight.
A fantastic two word poem.
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Twilight Delight These two words say all that needs to be said and forms a vivid picture in the mind about twilight.
A fantastic two word poem.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Thank you emrpoems.
Comment from evrenios
You have, indeed, managed to convey bliss in what is one of the shortest poems I have ever read. How? the use of the alliteration of the vowel sound which is round in the mouth, satisfying and bull bodied. There are no closed off ees or oos. This wide mouthed "ah" is close to a mantra. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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You have, indeed, managed to convey bliss in what is one of the shortest poems I have ever read. How? the use of the alliteration of the vowel sound which is round in the mouth, satisfying and bull bodied. There are no closed off ees or oos. This wide mouthed "ah" is close to a mantra. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Thank you evrenios. I like how you captured it.
