Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a very powerful piece. You communicate your theme well. I like the random rhyming in this piece. The word choice is vivid.
Barbara

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Thanks Barbara for your encouraging review...much appreciated..sue

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Amen, He is coming to fulfill the word of God your poem displays the things that will be in the last days of man on this earth there await a perfect place however Thank God.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Thanks Ronnie..always appreciate your review..sue

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

I think many have turned a blind eye to the chaos we have caused on the planet.Your poem has great strength and I do hope is read by many more. Regards, AT =/

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Hi AT thank you so much for taking time to review my poem and your encouragement..much appreciated...sue

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a 'wake-up call' to remind us of some of the ways we are mistreating Mother Earth. The poem launches into its theme with a powerful statement 'cull the earth ends with a serious reminder of the 'war' we rage with Her 'won't repent/Until we do'.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thank you zanya for your comments and review..always appreciated..sue

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

The short emphatic lines of this beat out your message with great strength. Sometimes I think that the world has gone mad. We seem hell-bent on an ever accelerating course of destruction.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks for a positive review and yes the world has gone mad...but we just all do our little bit to make it a better place....appreciate your time..sue

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Your poem says it all. We're destroying the earth at a faster pace each day, and no one seems to care as long as they are getting what they want out of it. Good poem; I enjoyed the read.

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 Comment Written 15-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thank you..so glad you enjoyed the poem and appreciate your time to review..sue

Comment from 4caresmiles

Excellent

This is superb! It is so very true that we ravage the Earth without thought or though it seems. You have said that in a way that is easy to read and relate to. Well done. Best wishes on your contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks so much for your encouraging review..much appreciated...sue