The Forest Phoenix Three
Rising Once Again.10 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
urges, rises, emerges, marches...strong action verbs add drama to this poem
strong visual of the Dark Lord standing tall among the weak
strong sensory appeal as the darkness shrouds the light and the shrill sound is heard
a powerful closing
Brooke
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urges, rises, emerges, marches...strong action verbs add drama to this poem
strong visual of the Dark Lord standing tall among the weak
strong sensory appeal as the darkness shrouds the light and the shrill sound is heard
a powerful closing
Brooke
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Dark Lord, a sad tale of the demise of the dark lord. I'm happy to see Patrick comes away unscathed in this poem. Even your colours are brighter in this poem. :) Is the dark lord letting the light in?
Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Hi Dark Lord, a sad tale of the demise of the dark lord. I'm happy to see Patrick comes away unscathed in this poem. Even your colours are brighter in this poem. :) Is the dark lord letting the light in?
Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Oh, the light will stay where it is! I thank you so very much for the kind review, much appreciated...dark lord
Comment from Darkhorse555
very beautifully drawn these words The Dark Lord is not very hard to find, standing tall among the weak also loved the image set in the stars excellent piece
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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very beautifully drawn these words The Dark Lord is not very hard to find, standing tall among the weak also loved the image set in the stars excellent piece
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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WOW!!! Thank you so very much for the kind words, coming from a talent like yourself, I do appreciate it...dark lord
Comment from DonandVicki
Well worth a Five do to the thought an work involved. It leaves me a bit chilled (I'm not complaning. I love Poe) Good work and good luck. Don
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Well worth a Five do to the thought an work involved. It leaves me a bit chilled (I'm not complaning. I love Poe) Good work and good luck. Don
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I thank you so very much for the kind review, I appreciate it...dark lord
Comment from Erik McGinley
The caption image is beautiful.
I'm uncertain about the poem. It seems to me like a parody of adolescent thought and a bit cheap in the vein that adolescent thought is.
This might have a place in a book of poetry if it was placed well. Otherwise, I would ignore this.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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The caption image is beautiful.
I'm uncertain about the poem. It seems to me like a parody of adolescent thought and a bit cheap in the vein that adolescent thought is.
This might have a place in a book of poetry if it was placed well. Otherwise, I would ignore this.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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This is actually a third installment of the series. Thank you for taking time to review this...dark lord
Comment from boxergirl
This is a different type poem for
me, but I liked its message. I could
feel Patrick's pain and his determination to fight
the Dark Lord and in the end, with the
Savior's help, he does. Well done. 8-)
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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This is a different type poem for
me, but I liked its message. I could
feel Patrick's pain and his determination to fight
the Dark Lord and in the end, with the
Savior's help, he does. Well done. 8-)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing my work, much appreciated...dark lord
Comment from Gungalo
Wow Dark Lord, this is awesome. The demise of the dark lord and love once again triumphs over all. Wowowowow. It's awesome.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Wow Dark Lord, this is awesome. The demise of the dark lord and love once again triumphs over all. Wowowowow. It's awesome.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you so very much for the sensational review. I dearly appreciate the kind words....dark lord
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Smiling at you.
Comment from Nosha17
I have never really embraced this type of poem, very dark as you describe in your profile. But, I have to say you have used some excellent words in your poem to create this Gothic atmosphere and it is effective. Well-written. Faye
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I have never really embraced this type of poem, very dark as you describe in your profile. But, I have to say you have used some excellent words in your poem to create this Gothic atmosphere and it is effective. Well-written. Faye
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Why thank you so very much, I appreciate you stopping by...dark lord
Comment from royowen
Good use of phrasing. Beautiful language and gripping imagery! It certainly is dark. It projects a" Stephen Kingness" about it. I like the fact that love is the only thing that triumphs over evil. I believe, in realty it does. I liked the fact that he looked to his Mentor/hero/God for help and strength.
Good luck with this one. Roy.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Good use of phrasing. Beautiful language and gripping imagery! It certainly is dark. It projects a" Stephen Kingness" about it. I like the fact that love is the only thing that triumphs over evil. I believe, in realty it does. I liked the fact that he looked to his Mentor/hero/God for help and strength.
Good luck with this one. Roy.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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WOW! Thank you so very much for the kind review. The other two poems before this lead up to the rising of Patrick. I thank you for your kindness...dark lord
Comment from c_lucas
The battle between good and evil must be fought within each of us. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good job.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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The battle between good and evil must be fought within each of us. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good job.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I thank you for the kind words and insight. You understood the meaning of the piece very well. Thank You!....dark lord
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You're welcome, Dark Lord. Charlie
