Wisdom's wisdom
As human beings, we all have wisdom. But how about wisdom?6 total reviews
Comment from CreativeXXXX
I love the concept of questioning wisdom itself, it is very original and clever.
You've conveyed an interesting message well and concisely. Great work, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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I love the concept of questioning wisdom itself, it is very original and clever.
You've conveyed an interesting message well and concisely. Great work, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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I'm so thankful for a very wonderful comment :) Hehe such flattering words :) I'm happy that you enjoyed it and loved the concept :)
Comment from RGstar
Good rhetoric. A nice little opener with a distinct motion of thought.
How clever to as the question of the very thing that often gives the answers.
This is very clever.
I really hope this does well, it is more innovative than meets the eye.
A good opener,
Really good. Good luck, and have a great day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Good rhetoric. A nice little opener with a distinct motion of thought.
How clever to as the question of the very thing that often gives the answers.
This is very clever.
I really hope this does well, it is more innovative than meets the eye.
A good opener,
Really good. Good luck, and have a great day.
RGstar
Comment Written 07-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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A great day to you RGstar. Thank you for your wonderful comments, it' very encouraging to me :) Thank you for your time. As one of the reviewers said that Solomon did too, made wisdom a person and ask it. And said yes, there really was hehe. Thank you so much ! :)happy me :)
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Good on you, :)
RG
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Thanks for making me feel good :) Nice to exchange messages with you
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And me too.
Always here for you. Welcome.
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Congratulations :) Upon seeing your profile, hundreds of ribbons were hang. Wow, thanks you for your support. :) Me too.
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The ribbons mean little, you will have plenty of those.
Your work is the thing that counts. You will understand more as time goes on.
Try to produce good work and you will get much from it. You will learn much here as there are some good writers, so your work will be encouraged. And anytime you need , I am always available as you are now on my fan-base.
For the most, just enjoy the experience and at the same time you will develop as a writer.
RG
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Thank you very much Roy :) Ribbons means appreciation and reading stunning works from writers who are great and rare :) You're one of those :) I may not have a ribbon now, but in my heart I already have a lot. Family, friends and good people like you. I'll reach you thanks for offering your help :)
Comment from James Dooney
Very interesting !!! I like your thoughts here. Just what is this thing we take for granted huh ! Props to you kid, you have won with this one.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Very interesting !!! I like your thoughts here. Just what is this thing we take for granted huh ! Props to you kid, you have won with this one.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for your so uplifting comments :) It's a pleasure and I'm very honored to hear this from you :) I'm not sure if I'm going to win but you made me feel like a winner now :) You're the winner for me, you make people feel great! :) GOD bless
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-penned, thought-provoking 5-7-5;
We often do not question why we follow the correct choices--we focus only on the result the decision has brought us.
The wisdom of wisdom--may we always follow its correct path.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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A well-penned, thought-provoking 5-7-5;
We often do not question why we follow the correct choices--we focus only on the result the decision has brought us.
The wisdom of wisdom--may we always follow its correct path.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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It is such an honor and pleasure for giving my 5-7-5 a time in your golden hours to be read by a brilliant person like you :) I am encouraged to write more of thought provoking thoughts :)Thank you :)
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You're welcome, #numbersign.
Have a great day:)
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Have a very blessed day too Capricorn30 :)
Comment from evrenios
This is interesting in that it consists of questions for which there are no answers. That is life, isn't it! The questions you ask are the ones we often make in the quiet of the night, or when things work out. Very enjoyable.
You may want to capitalize "What" as it begins a new sentence and question. Because you have so few words, it might be fun to try to make an alliteration here and there to create a secondary interest, such as wisdom and where or make momentous decisions (not quite as good as yours, but a thought). Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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This is interesting in that it consists of questions for which there are no answers. That is life, isn't it! The questions you ask are the ones we often make in the quiet of the night, or when things work out. Very enjoyable.
You may want to capitalize "What" as it begins a new sentence and question. Because you have so few words, it might be fun to try to make an alliteration here and there to create a secondary interest, such as wisdom and where or make momentous decisions (not quite as good as yours, but a thought). Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Thank you for giving my Haiku a time for you to read :) Thank you for your comments, I know this will help me in my journey here in making good stories and pieces someday :) Oh yes, my bad, I didn't notice it. It's a big W :)
Comment from kiwijenny
Solomon of old did just what you did here . He personified wisdom...she ....is a she. Which I have long suspected to be true:o)
The short answer although I know this is rhetorical...is yes....lol
God bless
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Solomon of old did just what you did here . He personified wisdom...she ....is a she. Which I have long suspected to be true:o)
The short answer although I know this is rhetorical...is yes....lol
God bless
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Such a great pleasure for having you review my work :) Thank you so much :) Hehe :) GOD Bless too :) I hope to see more of you here :)
