Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Love can't be denied
It's the soul of our being
The gem of our heart

Solid 5-7-5 syllable count as required for t he contest

True -love can't be denied and here when we have love we mut nurture and keep the flame burning bright

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thanks for your kind review

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thanks for your kind review

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thanks for your kind review

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thanks for your kind review

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

thanks for your kind review

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A nice touch here with this 5-7-5 and its view on 'love'- it is the part of us that truly 'can't be denied'. An inspiring image 'gem of our heart'.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thanks Zanya

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thanks Zanya

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thanks Zanya

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thanks Zanya

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

thanks Zanya

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Perfect syllable and line count, love is the most powerful of all emotions. It stirs up most of our other emotions. best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

thank you Cajungirl. it's appreciated

Comment from LorraineK

Excellent

I liked the illustration. A great poem that says so much in so few words. Every word, well chosen. Good luck in the contest. LorraineK

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review

reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014

thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2014

thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014

thank you LorraineK. i really appreciate your honest review

Comment from Crunchie

Excellent

A beautiful description of love in so few words' well done dear writer.

Thoughtful use of words and metaphor help the reader to grasp a little of the writers heart of love.

Good luck in the contest

Shalom,

Crunchie x

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

thanks so much Crunchie. Am deeply encouraged by your comment

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

thanks so much Crunchie. Am deeply encouraged by your comment

Comment from skye

Excellent

Terrific 5-7-5, using form and rules well.
You have captured the essence of love. Truly the soul and gem of life.
Excellent, with lovely color choice.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

thank you skye. Am impressed that you could be so detailed as to even notice the color. am grateful

reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014

thank you skye. Am impressed that you could be so detailed as to even notice the color. am grateful