Looking Back
A much modified triolet15 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your modified triolet--you were right to follow your instincts. I enjoyed your rhymes and your splendid "fabric/strand" metaphor. Thank you for sharing memories that are so close to your heart. -Joan
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I admired your modified triolet--you were right to follow your instincts. I enjoyed your rhymes and your splendid "fabric/strand" metaphor. Thank you for sharing memories that are so close to your heart. -Joan
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Peter,
What lovely memories you have, definitely to be treasured as you adjust and continue. Your poem paints such a picture of happiness and mutual love, I find it wonderful that you are able to look back with such joy and memories of love.
Patrick
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Hi Peter,
What lovely memories you have, definitely to be treasured as you adjust and continue. Your poem paints such a picture of happiness and mutual love, I find it wonderful that you are able to look back with such joy and memories of love.
Patrick
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
Comment from adewpearl
The modification works beautifully, Peter :-)
Lovely use of setting to create a backdrop perfect for the emotion you want to express. What lovely memories you created on that beach, my friend :-) Brooke
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The modification works beautifully, Peter :-)
Lovely use of setting to create a backdrop perfect for the emotion you want to express. What lovely memories you created on that beach, my friend :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
Comment from cynthia s
This is beautiful in not only its simplicity, but in it's visuality. I see hands, feel crunch, sometimes hot sand. Indeed, life's fabric, it brings up back. Best of luck to you Peter. This moved me.
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This is beautiful in not only its simplicity, but in it's visuality. I see hands, feel crunch, sometimes hot sand. Indeed, life's fabric, it brings up back. Best of luck to you Peter. This moved me.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
Comment from NadineM
You have many fond memories that will visit you daily, no matter where you walk, Peter. Life is about making memories with those dear to us. Your memory album is full. Enjoy reminiscing and savor the joy! Thanks for sharing this special poem.
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You have many fond memories that will visit you daily, no matter where you walk, Peter. Life is about making memories with those dear to us. Your memory album is full. Enjoy reminiscing and savor the joy! Thanks for sharing this special poem.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
