An Eagle Soars
An Eagle In A Cloud31 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
That would be good advice for all of us to follow - when it rains soar above the rain clouds - I think you may have just inspired in a poem in me TK. I enjoyed your beautiful poem.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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That would be good advice for all of us to follow - when it rains soar above the rain clouds - I think you may have just inspired in a poem in me TK. I enjoyed your beautiful poem.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much Teresa I like that idea above clouds go for it
TK
Comment from nancy_e_davis
The picture is awesome and amazing at the same time.
This is a lovely poem Sir Knight. I didn't know that about the eagle flying above the rain clouds. We see them often in Nevada. Beautiful birds. Well done. Nancy
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The picture is awesome and amazing at the same time.
This is a lovely poem Sir Knight. I didn't know that about the eagle flying above the rain clouds. We see them often in Nevada. Beautiful birds. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much Nancy I did not know either only found out about that when I was looking for a photo to go with the prose Very interesting for sure.. I have seen my share of eagles as well being from SO CAL have had made more than my share trips to Nevada and No Cal were they seem to flourish
tk
Comment from Loren (7)
It is so easy being a fan of yours - you say things I'm yet able to articulate. You believe as I believe. One of my favorite lines from this work and which seems to encapsulates the entire story line is this: "If you see him - then he has reached his destination."
Great job - Loren
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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It is so easy being a fan of yours - you say things I'm yet able to articulate. You believe as I believe. One of my favorite lines from this work and which seems to encapsulates the entire story line is this: "If you see him - then he has reached his destination."
Great job - Loren
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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wow thank you so much Loren That line you refer to is both spiritual as well a bit of fantasy So glad you like this one
TK
Comment from Janie King
THIS IS A VERY DELIGHTFULLY WRITTEN POEM AND A VERY ENJOYABLE READ. An Eagle is definitely and awesome bird in so many ways. Great piece. God loves you and so do i.
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THIS IS A VERY DELIGHTFULLY WRITTEN POEM AND A VERY ENJOYABLE READ. An Eagle is definitely and awesome bird in so many ways. Great piece. God loves you and so do i.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you Janie I tried to include my spiritual side in this as wel as my imaginative side Either way you just gotta believe!!
tk
Comment from Gungalo
Remember you have to believe
there is magic within the heart
or you shall never believe
in anything at all
A beautiful write TK that instills belief in people. Sigh it is so wondrous. I believe in this type of magic too.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Remember you have to believe
there is magic within the heart
or you shall never believe
in anything at all
A beautiful write TK that instills belief in people. Sigh it is so wondrous. I believe in this type of magic too.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Ah yes I know you believe because no one could write like you do if they didn't Thanks Ms G
TK
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Smile and sigh.
Comment from TamzinWhite
I like the strength of clarity, the message is told in a story and conjures up the eagle as the mascot for your love. I particularly like the last lines, "...believe there is magic in the heart or you shall never believe in anything all." A well written, uplifting poem. Thank you.
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I like the strength of clarity, the message is told in a story and conjures up the eagle as the mascot for your love. I particularly like the last lines, "...believe there is magic in the heart or you shall never believe in anything all." A well written, uplifting poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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I thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment on this Eagle prose Tamzin !!!
TK
Comment from Lynette Marie
I agree with you about Fairy Tales and Pixie Dust. It's that "anything can happen" belief that buoys my imagination and creativity. I didn't know that about eagles; very interesting.
This poem has lovely flow and a sweet, tender feel. Very nice!
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I agree with you about Fairy Tales and Pixie Dust. It's that "anything can happen" belief that buoys my imagination and creativity. I didn't know that about eagles; very interesting.
This poem has lovely flow and a sweet, tender feel. Very nice!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much Lynette for your kind words and you taking the time to read this Eagle also commenting on it...I did not know that about eagles either until I started this prose or ended it really..It just came up when I was looking for an appropriate photo
The things you can learn when you do something different
tk
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I forgot to mention the picture. It is captivating, and goes so well with your words!
Comment from evrenios
This is a truly interesting write. I loved your image of an eagle and the concept that it was an apparition or fairy. Well done. It is well written with some interesting alliterations (westerly waft).
Two minor things that you might want to think about. You use the wonderful word "Westerly" twice. Usually such an evocative word can only appear once in such a short work. Just a thought. Also - isn't heart less heartless? : You have put shapeless together. Also, I believe that any thing is one word. anything. You may want to change that. By the way - i really iike that statement - shapeless, heartless apparition
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This is a truly interesting write. I loved your image of an eagle and the concept that it was an apparition or fairy. Well done. It is well written with some interesting alliterations (westerly waft).
Two minor things that you might want to think about. You use the wonderful word "Westerly" twice. Usually such an evocative word can only appear once in such a short work. Just a thought. Also - isn't heart less heartless? : You have put shapeless together. Also, I believe that any thing is one word. anything. You may want to change that. By the way - i really iike that statement - shapeless, heartless apparition
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much for your input on this..You are so correct with all you have mentioned..I really did think I removed the second westerly reference but alas I read what I think not of that what I have written..Meaning I took it out lol Thanks for your help evrenios
tk
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
"Remember you have to believe there is magic within the heart or you shall never believe in any thing at all" - This is just such a beautiful and powerful ending to an eloquently expressed lesson everyone should learn. This piece is magic from start o finish and I thank you so much for sharing it with me.
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"Remember you have to believe there is magic within the heart or you shall never believe in any thing at all" - This is just such a beautiful and powerful ending to an eloquently expressed lesson everyone should learn. This piece is magic from start o finish and I thank you so much for sharing it with me.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Wow thank you so much Mystic Angel You are like me we both believe in magic !!!!!
TK
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Maybe if enough of us believe there will eventually be more of it in the world.
Comment from Jean Lutz
For me this took on spiritual meaning. Blessed is the one who looks on creation and sees the Creator. I've often wished I could be more like an eagle. The picture is awesome.
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For me this took on spiritual meaning. Blessed is the one who looks on creation and sees the Creator. I've often wished I could be more like an eagle. The picture is awesome.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much Jean.. It is a bit spiritual mixed with a bit of fantasy Think it covers both You just "gotta believe" Thank you again for the green cross of six I am humbled by it
TK
