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Comment from sunnilicious
Limerick is simplest when you have a good sense of humor. This poem came out great. I like how you turned it into a story. So deep you are... Fantastic work.
Merry Christmas: Day 8 - HAPPY 2014!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Limerick is simplest when you have a good sense of humor. This poem came out great. I like how you turned it into a story. So deep you are... Fantastic work.
Merry Christmas: Day 8 - HAPPY 2014!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Thank you Alicia. Happy 2014!
Comment from Joan E.
You must be energized this time of the year--you're making it hard to catch up! I too wrote a limerick today but you outdid me with your series of three (and I have no time to post it, since I already have a poem entered and am preparing for another travel adventure.) Thank you for sharing what changed your mind. I once again admired your use of alliteration and rhymes. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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You must be energized this time of the year--you're making it hard to catch up! I too wrote a limerick today but you outdid me with your series of three (and I have no time to post it, since I already have a poem entered and am preparing for another travel adventure.) Thank you for sharing what changed your mind. I once again admired your use of alliteration and rhymes. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 01-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Thank you Joan. That was a time 20 years ago. Can't wait to read your Limerick. Where are you off to?
Comment from RGstar
I am glad it did change minds.
You are much better off here. I saw the last poem but as yet not commented so I know this holds you close.
You are strong, because you must be to even comtemplate the ultimate, but how joyous you can rejoyce in the fact you can walk this earth, alongside that which nature has provided, reflect what is now that can never be retained once gone by, and lastly, your kin, and how the are in relation to you, because however bad we sometimes feel, they are so many in agony that cry out to stay living. It is but once.
Best wishes Treschiel.
Good to have you around.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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I am glad it did change minds.
You are much better off here. I saw the last poem but as yet not commented so I know this holds you close.
You are strong, because you must be to even comtemplate the ultimate, but how joyous you can rejoyce in the fact you can walk this earth, alongside that which nature has provided, reflect what is now that can never be retained once gone by, and lastly, your kin, and how the are in relation to you, because however bad we sometimes feel, they are so many in agony that cry out to stay living. It is but once.
Best wishes Treschiel.
Good to have you around.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Thank you RGstar. You comments are like a giant hug. I'm glad I'm still around and that period 20 years ago is over.
Comment from Keturah Martin
This writing addresses a reality which many are not willing to even acknowledge. I commend the author for writing reality and also the truth of the ending in this writing. Very well done, brother. Keep up the good work. Identifying with individuals in these boots may well be the thread of hope they need to grasp to. God bless!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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This writing addresses a reality which many are not willing to even acknowledge. I commend the author for writing reality and also the truth of the ending in this writing. Very well done, brother. Keep up the good work. Identifying with individuals in these boots may well be the thread of hope they need to grasp to. God bless!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much Keturah for your wise words.
Comment from Glasstruth
When we think we've had enough and want to bury our past in an ocean's tomb, is just running from one's self. Realizing others care might set things straight. Very nice aabba rhyming scheme. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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When we think we've had enough and want to bury our past in an ocean's tomb, is just running from one's self. Realizing others care might set things straight. Very nice aabba rhyming scheme. Well done! Les
Comment Written 01-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Thank you Les, you are so right.
Comment from queenv
The picture is so graphic. The poem depicts the meaning of the picture; drowning in a sea of despair. The stanzas are well written. Good job!
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2014
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The picture is so graphic. The poem depicts the meaning of the picture; drowning in a sea of despair. The stanzas are well written. Good job!
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2014
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Thank you Queenv. Now I need to write something happier.
