Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Mary once was filled with light"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
28 total reviews
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice spiritually uplifting poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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This is a nice spiritually uplifting poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging review, it means a lot to me. Merry Christmas to you.
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You're welcome. Thanks, Have a Happy New Year,
Dennis
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Happy New Year-Thank you for your help with my poems!
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with night/tight. Good alliteration with man/makes...when/was...greeted/Gabriel...ever/eternity...Him/heart...human/heard...than/that...and/always...line/like...Gabriel/Gudjorg...so/simple. Good complimentary photo followed by a message filled with passion.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with night/tight. Good alliteration with man/makes...when/was...greeted/Gabriel...ever/eternity...Him/heart...human/heard...than/that...and/always...line/like...Gabriel/Gudjorg...so/simple. Good complimentary photo followed by a message filled with passion.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your marvellous review, the Lord must be pleased! Merry Christmas to you! Gb
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Thanks again for your special review, it was very helpful!
Comment from B. Diehl
"To add one line I like to do,
Mary, Gabriel and to Gudbjorg too.
The gift of love so simple and true,
He'll always be in love with you."
^Profound ending to a profound poem. I love this.
Write on!
Merry Christmas. :)
-B<3<3<3<3
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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"To add one line I like to do,
Mary, Gabriel and to Gudbjorg too.
The gift of love so simple and true,
He'll always be in love with you."
^Profound ending to a profound poem. I love this.
Write on!
Merry Christmas. :)
-B<3<3<3<3
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, more than I could ask for. So beautifully said, " profound ending." Merry Christmas to you! Gudbjorg
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely, uplifting spiritual poem vividly conveys the theme that the Lord is THE ONE that will always love you--no matter what.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Your lovely, uplifting spiritual poem vividly conveys the theme that the Lord is THE ONE that will always love you--no matter what.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, really uplifting read. Yes, He loves us no matter what! Merry Christmas to you!
Comment from Dustman6180
I enjoyed the whole poem, but my favorite stanza is the first one where you indicate the heavenly love was embedded in Mary's soul and became our savior, Jesus Christ. Beautiful!
Dusty
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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I enjoyed the whole poem, but my favorite stanza is the first one where you indicate the heavenly love was embedded in Mary's soul and became our savior, Jesus Christ. Beautiful!
Dusty
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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What a wonderful reaction, always so good to read something from someone who understands the spiritual prinsipls well!
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This is a really beautiful reaction to my poem, Thank you so much for your input and encouragement. Merry Christmas to you. Gb
Comment from ELumpkins
Great piece. It is well written and is an excellent example of correct word collection and placement. The piece flows very smoothly from one stanza to the next and it is very easy to read. Good work Merry Chriatmas
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Great piece. It is well written and is an excellent example of correct word collection and placement. The piece flows very smoothly from one stanza to the next and it is very easy to read. Good work Merry Chriatmas
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you for writing this wonderful review, and sending me this message of love and beauty. Merry Christmas to you!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
You say this poem came to you in a vision a few years ago - then we are lucky you have decided to post it here on FS. Five good stanzas in rhyming couplets and a lovely faith poem. Thank you for sharing. Merry Christmas and all he best to you and yours for the New Year. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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You say this poem came to you in a vision a few years ago - then we are lucky you have decided to post it here on FS. Five good stanzas in rhyming couplets and a lovely faith poem. Thank you for sharing. Merry Christmas and all he best to you and yours for the New Year. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your marvellous review, your comments really hit the mark and I really appreciate them. Good you said this as I still have more poems still to post, most of them in English but also some in Icelandic. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Comment from L.A.Matthies
Mary once was filled with light,
it overshadowed her so bright,
Embedded deeply within her soul
became the Man Who makes you whole - A very nice Christmas tribute poem, in keeping with the true reason for the day! Messy Christmas :)
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Mary once was filled with light,
it overshadowed her so bright,
Embedded deeply within her soul
became the Man Who makes you whole - A very nice Christmas tribute poem, in keeping with the true reason for the day! Messy Christmas :)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Really marvellous reaction with a special beauty woven into it, " A very nice Christmas tribute poem, in keeping with the true reason for the day! Messy Christmas :)"
Very nice. Merry Christmas to you
Comment from kiwijenny
I wish you had written the whole thing.......your stanzas are so well written. To think of the Christ who was the Word....eternal becoming not just a child but a helpless embryo.....and Mary's part in that is awe inspiring still. Thank you for the spirituality of this. It is stirring
God bless
Merry Christmas
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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I wish you had written the whole thing.......your stanzas are so well written. To think of the Christ who was the Word....eternal becoming not just a child but a helpless embryo.....and Mary's part in that is awe inspiring still. Thank you for the spirituality of this. It is stirring
God bless
Merry Christmas
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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This is a very well written review, and your point about the embryo is so encompassing.
Comment from Smoothiecool
your words allow the reader to feel and see the images of the birth of Christ and how the gift of his love should be portrayed to the world
flows well easy read
cheers SC
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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your words allow the reader to feel and see the images of the birth of Christ and how the gift of his love should be portrayed to the world
flows well easy read
cheers SC
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, and your spirituality in seeing and understanding the message! Merry Christmas to you!
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welcome
