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From out of the Grayness

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Reaching from the gray areas to understand life

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Comment from lakeport
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Destiny, indeed it is written, that's a very heartfelt expressed prayer poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Lakeport....

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
    THANKS SO MUCH LAKEPORT...I always find it a blessing to hear from you as I know we share so many of the same philosophies and inspirations....all the very best to you my friend!! Vance
reply by lakeport on 19-Dec-2013
    your welcome. Lakeport.
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The picture reflects the message of the poem. I love how you employ the questioning tecnique. The poem flows well and is well written. Good job!

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2013


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
    Thanks queenv....hope you enjoy the holidays His Grayness Vance