autumn
as autumn comes the leaves fall and awaits.2 total reviews
Comment from Frankeddy
Hello I got a different syllable count I got 6-7-6. Your poem can be corrected
by leaving-AN- out of 1st line and -THE- out of third line.
If you go to Yahoo search find -Poem Workshop.com. You will be surprised
I just found it a note pad gives you syllable and word count + I am using it all
the time now. Good luck
Frankeddy
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Hello I got a different syllable count I got 6-7-6. Your poem can be corrected
by leaving-AN- out of 1st line and -THE- out of third line.
If you go to Yahoo search find -Poem Workshop.com. You will be surprised
I just found it a note pad gives you syllable and word count + I am using it all
the time now. Good luck
Frankeddy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
Comment from James W. A.
There is beautiful imagery present this poem. I can imagine that you drew inspiration from a scene you witnessed yourself because it shines through on the bounty of nature. Great job!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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There is beautiful imagery present this poem. I can imagine that you drew inspiration from a scene you witnessed yourself because it shines through on the bounty of nature. Great job!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you i appreciate your complement
