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Comment from Cajungirl
Please note that the low star count is due to the fact that this is not a 5/7/5 poem. It does not meet the qualifications of the contest. I will explain:
A 5/7/5 poem consist of only three line and 17 syllables.
Line 1 should have 5 syllables
Line 2 should have 7 syllables
Line 3 should also have 5 syllables
You may wish to use on-line help for word syllable count. Also, in the future please refer to the writing prompt or contest information provided by Fanstory. It details and/or provides examples of the contest requirements. I hope this information is helpful. I hope that you have time to edit or re-write you entry.
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Please note that the low star count is due to the fact that this is not a 5/7/5 poem. It does not meet the qualifications of the contest. I will explain:
A 5/7/5 poem consist of only three line and 17 syllables.
Line 1 should have 5 syllables
Line 2 should have 7 syllables
Line 3 should also have 5 syllables
You may wish to use on-line help for word syllable count. Also, in the future please refer to the writing prompt or contest information provided by Fanstory. It details and/or provides examples of the contest requirements. I hope this information is helpful. I hope that you have time to edit or re-write you entry.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
Comment from Merriweather
Your beginning line is a great introduction and says a lot. It gives the reader a feeling of anticipation, of wanting to know more. I would have liked instead of repetition in the third line, to have been given more information. After all, you have a lot to pack in the 4 lines.
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Your beginning line is a great introduction and says a lot. It gives the reader a feeling of anticipation, of wanting to know more. I would have liked instead of repetition in the third line, to have been given more information. After all, you have a lot to pack in the 4 lines.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
