Stories of the Dreamtime
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Dolphin Dreaming."Aboriginal myths and legends.
9 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Such a charming story! Is it an original tale or just made up for the message, listen to your elder or you will end badly? Either way, I thought it nice, with a good authentic tone in it. I am not an Aussie, never been there, but heard of Billabongs and Maoris, of dry inlands and of coastal plains. It was with joy I read this story with so many elements of Australia in it. Lovely how the children were turned into dolphins.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Such a charming story! Is it an original tale or just made up for the message, listen to your elder or you will end badly? Either way, I thought it nice, with a good authentic tone in it. I am not an Aussie, never been there, but heard of Billabongs and Maoris, of dry inlands and of coastal plains. It was with joy I read this story with so many elements of Australia in it. Lovely how the children were turned into dolphins.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020
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Hello Marjon, Yes, it is a legend. My grandmother was aboriginal. All the chapters of this book are lessons for the young and not so young.
Thanks so much. Blessings, Kay.
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Thanks for your answer. I want to read the other stories, so I became your fan!
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Thank you for your interest in our culture K xx
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I am, in general, interested in all cultures in the world, that I do know little or nothing about. Yours is certainly one of those.
Comment from aryr
Another wise lesson. A shame that the three children disobeyed their elders and paid a hefty price for doing so. I liked the story in that they were rescued as dolphins and it is interesting how many times when dolphins are seen that they are in threes. Well done. I remember many years ago one of our elders calmly said to a young boy who was rambunctious, adventurous etc. 'Why do you think all of us elders got to be so old?' The young boy had no clue. 'Because we listened to our elders as they did before that. Elders grow old and wise because we listen.' Well done thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Another wise lesson. A shame that the three children disobeyed their elders and paid a hefty price for doing so. I liked the story in that they were rescued as dolphins and it is interesting how many times when dolphins are seen that they are in threes. Well done. I remember many years ago one of our elders calmly said to a young boy who was rambunctious, adventurous etc. 'Why do you think all of us elders got to be so old?' The young boy had no clue. 'Because we listened to our elders as they did before that. Elders grow old and wise because we listen.' Well done thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed. I live near the sea and we have the season of the Humpback whales. They come to birth in the warm waters. And yes, dolphins are often in threesomes. Blessings, Kay.
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I am sure you enjoy the beauty the whales and dolphins provide.
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We have just had the Whale Festival. People go out on boards, form a circle and give thanks for the whales journey back home. Neat eh?
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Wow, that what the Wiccans do during the fall sightings on the Atlantic side. Our circle is more of a spiral rather than a circle.
Comment from Eleanor Buron
As with all your stories this story drew me into the interesting well of regional myths and legends - you present the background, native people and moral of the story so well I feel in the midst of action. I wish I had a six to give because it is deserving!
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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As with all your stories this story drew me into the interesting well of regional myths and legends - you present the background, native people and moral of the story so well I feel in the midst of action. I wish I had a six to give because it is deserving!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2013
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Elly, Thank you so much for reading; glad you enjoyed and I appreciate your thought of a sixer. Happy Christmas my friend, Kay XXX
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Kay, sorry I didn't email you. Many things happening. Catch up soon. Elly
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Thinking of you this Christmas Eve - may you have a blessed time and peace and good will for 2014. Love, Kay.
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Kay, this was the Christmas that almost wasn't. Sister's husband in hospital and now at a rehabilitation center for physical therapy. She needs 24 hour care at home. but the true meaning of Christmas was celebrated and I have a few days off to catch up on everything. I found your address from last year and will send a belated card with a few photos. Happy New Year, my friend. Love Elly
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Sorry for your troubles - always at Christmas these things happen amongst the joy comes pain. I wish you a Happy New Year my friend. Love, Kay XXX
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Things are improving - We are all in good spirits! ;) These days (not working) have been fine! Getting lots done at home and enjoyed our daughter's visit! ;) God Bless.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Another superb chapter, Kay. A sad ending, but merciful in that the children could continue to enjoy swimming which they, apparently, loved best. A great lesson/story that I enjoyed very much!
Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
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Another superb chapter, Kay. A sad ending, but merciful in that the children could continue to enjoy swimming which they, apparently, loved best. A great lesson/story that I enjoyed very much!
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
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Hello Bev, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed the story. Christmas blessings, Kay. XX
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You're very welcome, Kay. Christmas blessings to you as well. :0) Bev
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was such a lovely story again, Kay, but sad for the children's parents. It is a good lesson for other children to mind their parents, as they know more than they do. Your stories are always a treat to read, so keep them coming. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
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That was such a lovely story again, Kay, but sad for the children's parents. It is a good lesson for other children to mind their parents, as they know more than they do. Your stories are always a treat to read, so keep them coming. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
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Hello my friend, Thank you for reading and glad you liked the story. I have heaps more in mind. Love, Kay :-}
Comment from mumsyone
Another good legend, Kay. Question: When we stayed at a caravan park near Cairns, my husband and son played in what we called a "creek," where they swung out over the water on a vine. Would that have been called a billabong? I know most bodies of water are. Just wondering about that type.
old people who had never left their tribal hunting grounds and (were now were) fearful of moving away from home.
these were to carry the sick and old folks that (who)couldn't walk.
mulloway (Mulloway) spoke sternly to the children -(,)
The dingo were feeling the drought too, (but)they would not attack if the fire was kept burning all night.
Paddy Melons were (small animals like wallaby. Better: Paddy Melons (small animals like wallaby) were.
they would be sad, it just might work(.)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
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Another good legend, Kay. Question: When we stayed at a caravan park near Cairns, my husband and son played in what we called a "creek," where they swung out over the water on a vine. Would that have been called a billabong? I know most bodies of water are. Just wondering about that type.
old people who had never left their tribal hunting grounds and (were now were) fearful of moving away from home.
these were to carry the sick and old folks that (who)couldn't walk.
mulloway (Mulloway) spoke sternly to the children -(,)
The dingo were feeling the drought too, (but)they would not attack if the fire was kept burning all night.
Paddy Melons were (small animals like wallaby. Better: Paddy Melons (small animals like wallaby) were.
they would be sad, it just might work(.)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
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Thank you for reading and editing my friend. No, creeks are running water - billabongs are spring-fed like artesian bores. Happy Christmas, blessed be, Kay :-) XX
Comment from Eigle Rull
My friend, you have another hit here, as far as I'm concerned. I found no errors at all. The storyline is excellent. It teaches a good lesson also. It was interesting and it held my attention very well, as always. You describe these spunky you kids and their adventure very well. I enjoyed reading this story. It was great.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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My friend, you have another hit here, as far as I'm concerned. I found no errors at all. The storyline is excellent. It teaches a good lesson also. It was interesting and it held my attention very well, as always. You describe these spunky you kids and their adventure very well. I enjoyed reading this story. It was great.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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Thank you Eigle Rull - so pleased you enjoyed the little story. Happy Christmas, Kay.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
If you don't care I want to print your story off and share it with twelve year old twin girls and a seven year old little boy that will be spending Saturday night with me and mom. I think they will love it. James is seven and he loves dolphins, I can see him wanting to take the story to school and share it. This is an awesome story and I love the new words of your language and myths/ideas. Like turning the children into dolphins instead of letting them drown. Great story. God loves you and so do we, wish I had a 6 but I'm out.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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If you don't care I want to print your story off and share it with twelve year old twin girls and a seven year old little boy that will be spending Saturday night with me and mom. I think they will love it. James is seven and he loves dolphins, I can see him wanting to take the story to school and share it. This is an awesome story and I love the new words of your language and myths/ideas. Like turning the children into dolphins instead of letting them drown. Great story. God loves you and so do we, wish I had a 6 but I'm out.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for reading and glad you liked the story. You are most welcome to print any of the stories in the novel I am writing. Blessed be, Kay.
Comment from adewpearl
the waters from their swimming hole, and - add comma
I and most people love dolphins, so I predict a lot of reader interest
in this story.
known as Mulloway, stood tall - drop the comma
You explain the severity of the drought effectively
couldn't sleep that night, - I would make that a period
the rest of the tribe, and so they set off - add comma
I love the explanation for dolphins and the moral of the story - this is way cool, Kay :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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the waters from their swimming hole, and - add comma
I and most people love dolphins, so I predict a lot of reader interest
in this story.
known as Mulloway, stood tall - drop the comma
You explain the severity of the drought effectively
couldn't sleep that night, - I would make that a period
the rest of the tribe, and so they set off - add comma
I love the explanation for dolphins and the moral of the story - this is way cool, Kay :-) Brooke
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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Hello poor sick person, Thank you for reading and editing; hope your prediction is right - most folks love the dolphins. Dolphins don't get colds, cause they have long noses. Ha. One reader has asked for a lend of my story to read to her youngsters on Christmas Eve, sweet isn't it? Blessings, K.
