Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 108 "Crystalline Snow"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from Enchanted2write
So when I first read the title of this poem, I was a little confuse until I read your notes, now it makes a whole lot of sense. This is beautifully written and the best time to be written for the year, plus we got snow!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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So when I first read the title of this poem, I was a little confuse until I read your notes, now it makes a whole lot of sense. This is beautifully written and the best time to be written for the year, plus we got snow!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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Thank you Enchanted2write.
Comment from MERRY1
it is an interesting way of writing a poem. I like the way you use a word and then describe it and apply another that applies to the description. Don't know if that makes sense but can't think how to say what I mean.well done anyway
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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it is an interesting way of writing a poem. I like the way you use a word and then describe it and apply another that applies to the description. Don't know if that makes sense but can't think how to say what I mean.well done anyway
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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Thank you Merry1.
Comment from FrannyG
This is really lovely. Even before I read about the form it stood strong in its own right (write!). I love 'snow flocked trees' and then the internal rhyme with 'Locked'. Lovely use of language and rhyme. A very fine poem.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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This is really lovely. Even before I read about the form it stood strong in its own right (write!). I love 'snow flocked trees' and then the internal rhyme with 'Locked'. Lovely use of language and rhyme. A very fine poem.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much FrannyG.
Comment from Sueellen11
Excellent example of this child four/ 1962 created by Ann Marie,, she is a very talent poetess,, true to its form,, and yes I love the last stanza GOD sure makes everything beautiful,, well done,,blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Excellent example of this child four/ 1962 created by Ann Marie,, she is a very talent poetess,, true to its form,, and yes I love the last stanza GOD sure makes everything beautiful,, well done,,blessings sueellen
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you Sueellen. He certainly does.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your masterful interpretation of the form Richie introduced to us. I enjoyed your rhymes and your series and your "fashions" metaphor. You could be describing the scene in Eastern Canada today! Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
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Thank you for sharing your masterful interpretation of the form Richie introduced to us. I enjoyed your rhymes and your series and your "fashions" metaphor. You could be describing the scene in Eastern Canada today! Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
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Thank you Joan.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Very lovely poem, Tom. Perfect photo for this. I enjoyed the poem's style. I always appreciate your author's notes, as I am woefully ignorant about poetry. Nicely done, Tom.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
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Very lovely poem, Tom. Perfect photo for this. I enjoyed the poem's style. I always appreciate your author's notes, as I am woefully ignorant about poetry. Nicely done, Tom.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
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Thank you Marietta.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo once more and then this lovely new style. You wrote it all about snow and in rhyme which I don't think is even required.
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Excellent photo once more and then this lovely new style. You wrote it all about snow and in rhyme which I don't think is even required.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
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Thank you Ine. You are correct.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An intriguing Child Four poem and a great subject.
Despite the harsness of the winter season there is a definite beauty to it's majesty as well.
You have described well many of these facets of the wonder to behold.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
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An intriguing Child Four poem and a great subject.
Despite the harsness of the winter season there is a definite beauty to it's majesty as well.
You have described well many of these facets of the wonder to behold.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
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Thank you Shirley. It can be quite lovely.
Comment from rod007
This is a very well thought out poem and the poet's words "Nature's decorations" brings forth the image of our own human Christmas decorations and how artificial it is compared to the decorations of a natural snow fall on that tree by Nature and God. Very well done Tom.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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This is a very well thought out poem and the poet's words "Nature's decorations" brings forth the image of our own human Christmas decorations and how artificial it is compared to the decorations of a natural snow fall on that tree by Nature and God. Very well done Tom.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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Thank you Rod, yes, I agree.
Comment from sunnilicious
That poem came out beautiful. The descriptions are so creatively visual. Well thought out. Nicely written. Good new format. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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That poem came out beautiful. The descriptions are so creatively visual. Well thought out. Nicely written. Good new format. Excellent work.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2013
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Thank you Alicia. Give one a try.
