Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words are important during this holiday season. It is a season of trust and this could be a poem to be read at Christmas to remind others what is really important.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013

Hi... Thanks. Trying to reach a global audience... All Holidays, including XMAS too! just Bill

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Just Bill,
You have done a great job with the 5-7-5 poem for the contest - perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
~teresa~

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013

Thanks! My first time at the rodeo... let's see how people like it (or not!). Ha!