Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "Childless - No Cries To Console"A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from GratefullyRecovering
This really spoke to me! I've had 5 miscarriages. I've had dreams about her... Your poem deserves to win, mine sucks lol you're really good. I hope you do win, this is beautiful and made me cry!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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This really spoke to me! I've had 5 miscarriages. I've had dreams about her... Your poem deserves to win, mine sucks lol you're really good. I hope you do win, this is beautiful and made me cry!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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I am sorry about the miscarriages. I know that God is in control and we don't know what might have happened in the little ones' lives had they continued to full term. But they are all with Our Heavenly Father. Thanks for a very sensitive review and contest vote.
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Put the poem up again today with a new picture have a look at the Author note explaining why.
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Well done :)
Comment from rouskin
I loved it all, but especially this part:
No one understands
a would-be Mother's heart.
Her desire to be a part.
Of that tenderness and
softness of a Little baby's 'feel'
The presence of a little life,
In whom to place her zeal.
Good luck and have a great week
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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I loved it all, but especially this part:
No one understands
a would-be Mother's heart.
Her desire to be a part.
Of that tenderness and
softness of a Little baby's 'feel'
The presence of a little life,
In whom to place her zeal.
Good luck and have a great week
Comment Written 02-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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Thanks very much appreciate the great review.
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Put the poem up again today with a new picture have a look at the Author note explaining why.
Comment from Smoothiecool
what a beautiful picture to compliment your free verse poem
good luck
line three you have used a capital "O" was this suppose to be lower case
you chosen words portrays a woman's plight not being the mother she was suppose to be
easy read and flows well
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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what a beautiful picture to compliment your free verse poem
good luck
line three you have used a capital "O" was this suppose to be lower case
you chosen words portrays a woman's plight not being the mother she was suppose to be
easy read and flows well
Comment Written 02-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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Thanks very much for the review will check the error and change if needed.
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Put the poem up again today with a new picture have a look at the Author note explaining why.
Comment from donaldcolson
I like your poem and I think it does get at an important longing in some women. It is very much a woman"s poem. It has emotion, drama and poignancy. don
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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I like your poem and I think it does get at an important longing in some women. It is very much a woman"s poem. It has emotion, drama and poignancy. don
Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thanks Don, can't say anymore not a woman writing let me tell ya.
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Sorry for the gender confusion. You certainly have a woman's perspective, much to your credit. don
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No worries get to know you later I guess.
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Put the poem up again today with a new picture have a look at the Author note explaining why.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is so deeply moving. Your emotion just oozes from every turn of phrase. This is a beautifully written piece and a most deserving contest entry. I wish you all the best in the voting. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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This is so deeply moving. Your emotion just oozes from every turn of phrase. This is a beautifully written piece and a most deserving contest entry. I wish you all the best in the voting. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thanks friend. Appreciate the wonderful review. Wish the sweet little girl in the picture was ours too.
