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Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Predisposed to a Poetic Predilection"
Free Verse Poetry

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Comment from Sasha
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I am but a humble poet my darling
I do not merely love you
I breathe in deep the entire cosmos
and exhale a universe repainted for two...

My goodness, it really doesn't get much better than that, does it?

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
    How sweet of you to say so. I was pretty happy with that. Thank you very much. mikey
Comment from Darkhorse555
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now dear friend these words just dazzled the stars in space
I breathe in deep the entire cosmos
and exhale a universe repainted for two
sweet beautifully crafted piece mikey

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
    Thank you my friend. That part came out pretty good!! mikey
Comment from Sueellen11
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Micky,, this is lovely,, I like your colour background,, and that picture is beautiful,, in loves embrace in moon light,, very nice,,this stanza I like,,

I am but a humble poet my darling
I do not merely love you
I breathe in deep the entire cosmos
and exhale a universe repainted for two,,

Bet Donna likes this one,,blessings sueellen

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
    Thank you. Glad you liked it. Yes, Donna liked it. I think she might kiss me. Ha! mikey
Comment from rhonny
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Your poem contains many beautiful words - very poetic - very intense - yet I have to that so much alliteration can be overwhelming :)

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
    Yes, I can get carried away. I saw one on the front page that was so sparse when referring to the seasons that I had to add a few thoughts. I guess I came up with more than a few!! Glad you managed to get through it and find some good ones, mikey
reply by rhonny on 01-Dec-2013
    I did Rhonda :)
Comment from TOMORAL
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Delightful free verse with awesome, awesome alliteration. I like the walk in posey's meadows also. Very well done. Thank you!

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
    Wow. What a wonderful compliment from a fine writer. So very encouraging! Thank you most kindly, mikey
Comment from AnnieGale
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Your words are brilliant and colorful....deep in meaning and feeling...I liked your use of the season's and how they relate to love. Enjoyed this very much.

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
    I saw one on the front page mention the seasons and that got me going. I thought that there was a bit more to them. Ha! Such wonderful complements. I have the biggest smile. Thank you so very much. mikey
Comment from country ranch writer
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Love is fragile like a butterfly it must be handled just right or it will fly away and never come back, true love wins again and again

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2013

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
    Can't beat that! Thank you most kindly, mikey
reply by country ranch writer on 01-Dec-2013
    welcome