Corky Cooters
haiku15 total reviews
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of Corky Cooters. Excuse me for saying this, but so many of 5-7-5 poems written by folks on FS don't make sense to me. I write short stories and I don't know anything about poetry, except I enjoy reading it. Your poem is both cute and actually true, making it sensible to me. AND your title is clever. Good luck in the contest. Carole
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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To the author of Corky Cooters. Excuse me for saying this, but so many of 5-7-5 poems written by folks on FS don't make sense to me. I write short stories and I don't know anything about poetry, except I enjoy reading it. Your poem is both cute and actually true, making it sensible to me. AND your title is clever. Good luck in the contest. Carole
Comment Written 29-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Hi Carole Rosa, My sincere appreciation for your charming comments and positive rating. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the read and found the poem comprehensible. Happy Holidays!
Comment from trevorletang
tiny turtle tots
bob about like buoyant cork
life preserving shells
This is both a witty and a cute poem. Well done on the structure.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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tiny turtle tots
bob about like buoyant cork
life preserving shells
This is both a witty and a cute poem. Well done on the structure.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Hi trevorletang, I'm delighted that you enjoyed the read and I greatly appreciate your courteous comments and generous rating. Happy Holidays!
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
tiny turtle tots Love the alliteration intro
bob about like buoyant cork All those b's
life preserving shells Very punny indeed.
Loved it.
Regards:
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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tiny turtle tots Love the alliteration intro
bob about like buoyant cork All those b's
life preserving shells Very punny indeed.
Loved it.
Regards:
Comment Written 29-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Hi Stephen, My sincere appreciation for your courteous comments and positive rating. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the read. Happy Holidays!
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Dear ?: Thanks and Happy Holidays to you too. Just posted 2 short poems from a series of 100 I'm writing on America. Do drop by sometime. Thanks.
Cheers: Steve C
Comment from TamzinWhite
This is a really cute little message. The picture is adorable. I like 'tiny turtle tots' - there is something very cute about a turtle.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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This is a really cute little message. The picture is adorable. I like 'tiny turtle tots' - there is something very cute about a turtle.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Hi TamzinWhite, I'm delighted that you enjoyed the read and I greatly appreciate your cordial comments and generous rating. Happy Holidays!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Very cute spin on the contest requirements. I so admire all the folks who can do so much with a simple 17 syllables. I wish you all the best in the voting and thanks for sharing this with me.
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Very cute spin on the contest requirements. I so admire all the folks who can do so much with a simple 17 syllables. I wish you all the best in the voting and thanks for sharing this with me.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2013
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Hi Mystic Angel, My utmost appreciation for your courteous comments and positive rating. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the read. Happy Holidays!
