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Comment from rod007
I never grew my beard so much, I cannot do that in my profession as everyone will gawk at me but there are times I want my beard to wander to distant horizons. Maybe when I am retired one day I will. Great poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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I never grew my beard so much, I cannot do that in my profession as everyone will gawk at me but there are times I want my beard to wander to distant horizons. Maybe when I am retired one day I will. Great poem. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you Rod.
Comment from joneau2
That's a pretty neat format, and quite revealing. I'll bet you were asked to play, or have played, Santa. What kind of fertilizer are you feeding that beard?
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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That's a pretty neat format, and quite revealing. I'll bet you were asked to play, or have played, Santa. What kind of fertilizer are you feeding that beard?
Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you Joneau, Ha! it grew about an inch a month. Must have been the greasy food.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent biographical sketch in poetic form. It has good rhyme, flow, figurative language and imagery. It meets the requirements of the form as spcified by the author.
Preston
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent biographical sketch in poetic form. It has good rhyme, flow, figurative language and imagery. It meets the requirements of the form as spcified by the author.
Preston
Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you, Preston.
Comment from Capricorn30
The Reischel montage--readers view the author photographs as they learn the various topics of which the poet writes;
A greater understanding of a Fanstorian in a well-crafted, bio-writing.
Excellent!
Great concept!
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The Reischel montage--readers view the author photographs as they learn the various topics of which the poet writes;
A greater understanding of a Fanstorian in a well-crafted, bio-writing.
Excellent!
Great concept!
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you Margaret. Try one it's fun!
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Thomas
Retired manager, couch potato, photographer, poet
Brother of Chuck, Bobbie, Dick, Joe, Marilee, and Laurie
Lover of his wife, the state of Minnesota, Viking Football, Rain
Who feels the majesty of nature, connection with the Cosmos, the pull of curiosities. LOVE THIS LINE
Who fears some bugs, rejection, and pain
Who worked 44 years for same company, married 38 years, born on 9/11
Would like to see - the world, man in space, world peace
Has lived in New York, Colorado, and Minnesota, now St. Paul, Mn.
Reischel NOW I KNOW WHERE YOU GOT YOUR NOM DE PLUME
Love the pics you handsome devil.
Regards:
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Thomas
Retired manager, couch potato, photographer, poet
Brother of Chuck, Bobbie, Dick, Joe, Marilee, and Laurie
Lover of his wife, the state of Minnesota, Viking Football, Rain
Who feels the majesty of nature, connection with the Cosmos, the pull of curiosities. LOVE THIS LINE
Who fears some bugs, rejection, and pain
Who worked 44 years for same company, married 38 years, born on 9/11
Would like to see - the world, man in space, world peace
Has lived in New York, Colorado, and Minnesota, now St. Paul, Mn.
Reischel NOW I KNOW WHERE YOU GOT YOUR NOM DE PLUME
Love the pics you handsome devil.
Regards:
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you Stephen. Pretty simple, huh?
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Dear Tom: Nothing's ever simple but when you are talented like yourself...
Cheers: Steve C
