To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Stardust in Her Eyes"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from pipersfancy
This is the most beautiful expression of love - the contrast between perception and reality (from your point of view)... although, who is to say which is perceived and which is real? Lovely in every word, mikey!
Wishing you well in this contest!
PF
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2013
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This is the most beautiful expression of love - the contrast between perception and reality (from your point of view)... although, who is to say which is perceived and which is real? Lovely in every word, mikey!
Wishing you well in this contest!
PF
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2013
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That is so beautifully put. So, happy you liked this one. I am somewhat shocked to be in the contest. I am truly honored. Some wonderful company. Thank you for the encouragement and all the stars. Big smiles! mikey
Comment from phoenix13447
Oh me oh my. My romantic side is busting out again. What a delightful poem. What an evocative love story. Everybody should have the chance, just once, to play in your world. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Oh me oh my. My romantic side is busting out again. What a delightful poem. What an evocative love story. Everybody should have the chance, just once, to play in your world. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Wow. What truly lovely words to hear. You are too kind. I am delighted that you enjoyed my little piece. So very encouraging and appreciated. Thank you kindly. Welcome by the way, I see you are even newer than I. An awesome little oasis here. mikey
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Yes it is and a wonderful place for would be wordsmiths to hang out. Thanks for the welcome.
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I just looked at one of your pieces. you don't need "would be" in front of wordsmith. Wordsmith suits you fine. mikey
Comment from Cookie333
This one makes me wonder...how does Hubby see me? Does he know there is nothing I wouldn't do for him? The other, the one who has our all, what a wonderful image Mike,
thanks for sharing,
karen
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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This one makes me wonder...how does Hubby see me? Does he know there is nothing I wouldn't do for him? The other, the one who has our all, what a wonderful image Mike,
thanks for sharing,
karen
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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If I know it, I am more than sure he does. You only laugh hysterically at the one you love. Hahaha!! seriously though, it is quite clearly evident in your writing. mikey
Comment from ravenblack
Really like your font duel of perspectives. I know I have always questioned what others see in me, a hero but really a joker, and your self-effacing humility shines through. If needed, that little stone skipping boy will rise up and slay the beasts. This is such a tender write with great rhythm and alliteration throughout.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Really like your font duel of perspectives. I know I have always questioned what others see in me, a hero but really a joker, and your self-effacing humility shines through. If needed, that little stone skipping boy will rise up and slay the beasts. This is such a tender write with great rhythm and alliteration throughout.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Awesome review. Glad you liked the color thing. Thought it would be a lot easier to read with so many words and all. So happy that I put some time in on this. Appreciate all the stars and great compliments. Thank you very much, mikey
Comment from w.j.debi
What a beautiful love poem. Creative use of the contrasting colors to highlight the stardust hero that she sees in him verses the lucky little boy he considers himself to be to receive such admiration. Her knight, her champion--it is what the little boy transforms into because she believes, because she loves him.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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What a beautiful love poem. Creative use of the contrasting colors to highlight the stardust hero that she sees in him verses the lucky little boy he considers himself to be to receive such admiration. Her knight, her champion--it is what the little boy transforms into because she believes, because she loves him.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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I am so pleased that you enjoyed it so much. You have it exactly and I am glad you liked the color idea. I thought is would be a cool thing and make it flow easier. What a wonderful review!!! Big smiles and a happy dance. mikey
Comment from Nichola
A beautifully written free form verse. It gives the reader the feeling of high spirits and out-worldliness, as if in a fantasy. The boy and girl are deeply in love with each other and would even appear silly to capture the attention of their beloved. A truly lovely poem with a wonderful carefree feel to it. I love it.
Nichola
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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A beautifully written free form verse. It gives the reader the feeling of high spirits and out-worldliness, as if in a fantasy. The boy and girl are deeply in love with each other and would even appear silly to capture the attention of their beloved. A truly lovely poem with a wonderful carefree feel to it. I love it.
Nichola
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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Oh how wonderful to read these words. Such great praise and compliments. You are too kind. It so pleases me that you enjoyed my little piece and got it so completely. Thank you so very much!! mikey
Comment from Sueellen11
This is beautiful,, I love the two thoughts of you and your lady love,,beautifully worded,, a very lovely read,, I still got my marbles,, lost my bonker thought,, and could never get that pebble yo skip along the water,,, great great and a few little memories you brought back of my childhood,,want a game of marbles,,,blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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This is beautiful,, I love the two thoughts of you and your lady love,,beautifully worded,, a very lovely read,, I still got my marbles,, lost my bonker thought,, and could never get that pebble yo skip along the water,,, great great and a few little memories you brought back of my childhood,,want a game of marbles,,,blessings sueellen
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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I am so delighted that you liked this. What wonderful compliments. I actually did play marbles in school!! But, alas, I lost them. ha! Thank you for all of these stars and kind words. big smiles. I am singing about you now. mikey
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Your funny Micky,, I only lost my prize bonker,, but still have marbles,, both glass and brain ha ha
Comment from Devon Phipps
I think your poem displays the moment that two people instantly have a connection. Love takes over, they get lost in lust and passion. it's hard to come out of this emotionally state.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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I think your poem displays the moment that two people instantly have a connection. Love takes over, they get lost in lust and passion. it's hard to come out of this emotionally state.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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Thank you kindly my friend. Most appreciated, mikey
Comment from rouskin
she proclaims me champion of her heart and soul
the one...the only...the everything
Such a lucky boy...I'm afraid there is nothing more to add to your perfect writing.As always. Simply Great.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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she proclaims me champion of her heart and soul
the one...the only...the everything
Such a lucky boy...I'm afraid there is nothing more to add to your perfect writing.As always. Simply Great.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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You are too kind. I am so pleased you liked this. Thank you for the great review, mikey
Comment from reconciled
Hey Mike...-smile- absolutely brilliant. ...and that is it isn't it...? when loving eyes see you as a giant....you are. You're a lucky man to have found those eyes....love ya man michael
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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Hey Mike...-smile- absolutely brilliant. ...and that is it isn't it...? when loving eyes see you as a giant....you are. You're a lucky man to have found those eyes....love ya man michael
Comment Written 25-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2013
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Don't I know it. Poor thing. Ha! I'm not telling her anything different either. Ha! So pleased you liked this. Appreciate all of these stars. as you would say whoooOOOOOoooooooooo hOOOOooooooooooooooo mikey
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lol....-smile-
