Tips for FS Starting Beginners
Righting Trips for Beginners Who Are Just Starting Out40 total reviews
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Deniz22
Here's a Five inspite of the spelling and grammar. Keep taking the meds, I'm sure they'll help. One day.
This gave me a good chuckle, some of us do take things far to seriously.
The outfit is very fetching by the way, I hope the walls are nicely lined as well.
Patrick
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Hi Deniz22
Here's a Five inspite of the spelling and grammar. Keep taking the meds, I'm sure they'll help. One day.
This gave me a good chuckle, some of us do take things far to seriously.
The outfit is very fetching by the way, I hope the walls are nicely lined as well.
Patrick
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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You knew about the meds? I'm feeling better, really I am and I think I'll be out soon. Where did you say you live? LOL Thanks for the review, glad you got a chuckle out of it! Dennis
Comment from ElPoetry001
Excellent.
Write for substance, the form can be provided by the 'PPACs.'
We all search for our message in your story, we can see the same frustrations, but we all conclude that basket '1313' is for the 'PPACs.' *
*Pedantic-Pissy-Ass-Critics.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Excellent.
Write for substance, the form can be provided by the 'PPACs.'
We all search for our message in your story, we can see the same frustrations, but we all conclude that basket '1313' is for the 'PPACs.' *
*Pedantic-Pissy-Ass-Critics.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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I like your insite into this sight! LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing. Dennis
Comment from JeanneHP
It took me a minute to see that this was written "Tongue in cheek." Loved every word of it, though I don't think I'll take the time to point out errors. Very well done! :-)
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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It took me a minute to see that this was written "Tongue in cheek." Loved every word of it, though I don't think I'll take the time to point out errors. Very well done! :-)
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Glad you resstrained yourself re the errors. One newbie actually gave me a three but encouraged me that I was a good writer who needed to spill better. :) Thank you, Jeanne. Dennis
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Genuinely, hysterically funny and anyone who can make me laugh out loud on a bitter winter morning deserves a six for that reason alone. Do you love me yet?
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Genuinely, hysterically funny and anyone who can make me laugh out loud on a bitter winter morning deserves a six for that reason alone. Do you love me yet?
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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I've always loved you, just not in the usual way. You are wonderfully honest and you've traveled a hard road with guts and a measure of grace...which comes from God who has a whole lot more to give...all of us.
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh my land what a wonderful job you've done with this write up Deniz. You've got everything in here including the overuse of exclamation marks!!! Tip number 2: avoid long, rumbling sentences is brilliant and my personel favourite. I am filled with envy because I never thought of that one before you did, but it's a fact I'll have to except. ;-)
This is signature Deniz satire and I'm giving you top grades even if you did spell grammar incorrectly. It's grammer in this particular context. :)
Keep your fingers on the keyboard and your imagination in the atmosphere dear one because you got the know it all.
Your friend,
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Oh my land what a wonderful job you've done with this write up Deniz. You've got everything in here including the overuse of exclamation marks!!! Tip number 2: avoid long, rumbling sentences is brilliant and my personel favourite. I am filled with envy because I never thought of that one before you did, but it's a fact I'll have to except. ;-)
This is signature Deniz satire and I'm giving you top grades even if you did spell grammar incorrectly. It's grammer in this particular context. :)
Keep your fingers on the keyboard and your imagination in the atmosphere dear one because you got the know it all.
Your friend,
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Mr dear Gloria,it's so good so good to hear from you! Was it the 62 cents that brought you back?:) Sorry to rumble on but I really have missed bantering with you. Can you except that? :) You can be filled with envy but you will have to work on the beady eyes thing!!!!!! Can you except that? LOL Dennis
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It had to be the money Dennis, dear. Well, that and my beady eyes:) Good to be back and yes you can expect that!!!!!
Comment from Introspection
As a new bee, I had to have a quick glance at some of your other work, just to make sure. Very funny. An advise communist indeed!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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As a new bee, I had to have a quick glance at some of your other work, just to make sure. Very funny. An advise communist indeed!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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With your name I thought you might confine yourself to merely looking deep inside. :) Thanks for looking around, hope everything was tidy. The crowds that preceded you tend to leave a mess. Seriously, thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it. Dennis
Comment from jmdg1954
We'll keep righting if ewe'll keep re viewing hour pomes and storys. Eye knead sixes all the thyme, member dat. Do eye got nuff ritten ear so u can give me da measles 62sents. Chesapeak. I meen cheap sake. No dats not right. 62 scents is weally cheep. Dat makes ewe a cheesecake. Sheet, watts the word...
Great stuff my friend, all in fun. John
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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We'll keep righting if ewe'll keep re viewing hour pomes and storys. Eye knead sixes all the thyme, member dat. Do eye got nuff ritten ear so u can give me da measles 62sents. Chesapeak. I meen cheap sake. No dats not right. 62 scents is weally cheep. Dat makes ewe a cheesecake. Sheet, watts the word...
Great stuff my friend, all in fun. John
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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62 cents in my life is a big deal. We're so poor we have a dead dog for a pet. No food, no vet fees and we don't have to walk...drag him every day. Thanks for reading John. Glad you like it! Dennis
Comment from Dean Kuch
Bwaaaaa-ha-ha-ah- ha-ha-haaaaaaaa!!!
Hell, Deniz22, this is too funny for words, my friend. Ha, I don't even know where to start, so I guess the beginning is always the best place...
I began to read this, and the tongue-in-cheekiness of it hit me right between the eyes. One person writes a newbies essay which gets accolades, and the newbie instructors all file in to put in their two-cents worth in, like rats following the Pied Piper. The fact that you did a parody of this recent "phenomenon", made it all the funnier.
Point very well taken, my friend.
Excellent work!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Bwaaaaa-ha-ha-ah- ha-ha-haaaaaaaa!!!
Hell, Deniz22, this is too funny for words, my friend. Ha, I don't even know where to start, so I guess the beginning is always the best place...
I began to read this, and the tongue-in-cheekiness of it hit me right between the eyes. One person writes a newbies essay which gets accolades, and the newbie instructors all file in to put in their two-cents worth in, like rats following the Pied Piper. The fact that you did a parody of this recent "phenomenon", made it all the funnier.
Point very well taken, my friend.
Excellent work!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Thanks so much,Dean. Glad you liked it but sorry you didn't realize it's a serious piece that has helped thousands of people to get started writing. They say, "WE can do better than that idiot." Oh well, after I'm gone, they'll appreciate me. I'm going to stick around to see it. :) Dennis
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I hear you, my friend. I often find humor in the strangest places, though. I suppose it's just the way I'm wired, so to speak...
Comment from N.K. Wagner
From your heart, huh? And what a twisted organ that must be.
Very funny, Deniz. Glad I got a chance to see the "reel ewe."
:D Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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From your heart, huh? And what a twisted organ that must be.
Very funny, Deniz. Glad I got a chance to see the "reel ewe."
:D Nancy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Nancy, Nancy, now my admittedly twisted heart has the arrow of your truth stuck in the middle of it. But it's worth it because you said "it's very funny"! I'm feeling better already. :) Thank you, Dennis
Comment from visionary1234
I was sawly tempted to give you a one star review, but my good friend Tommy wouldn't allow it! He said people with hairy toes should be encouraged and that I should just be honest.
big hugs from a twisted person with beady eyes who is full of jealousy ... well, the PERSON is full of jealousy of course, not the beady eyes ...
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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I was sawly tempted to give you a one star review, but my good friend Tommy wouldn't allow it! He said people with hairy toes should be encouraged and that I should just be honest.
big hugs from a twisted person with beady eyes who is full of jealousy ... well, the PERSON is full of jealousy of course, not the beady eyes ...
Comment Written 24-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013
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Wow! Sitting at my hairy feet (I have you on record) acknowledging my natural male supremecy and now this; "big hugs"! It's really true, grudging admiration is the best after all. Glad you liked it you vision you. Dennis
