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Children of destiny

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One can anticipate a prize~ Heaven sent

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Comment from Moon baby
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Beautifully written and the style of writing so eloquent. Although this is above my understanding, I do know great writing when I see it. You must be a published writer with the creativity you have.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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Certainly, a beautiful piece my friend. Your words of choice are precise and engaging, provoking thought beyond the most tuned in. I enjoy your work! Well done, Sir, Johnny.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

Comment from royowen
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I think children, if raised to believe in a world of general unbelief, is a good thing these days. I can remember my mother sending me to Sunday school,even though she herself never set foot inside a church, why? Because she wanted to give me hope,when she herself didn't have, mind it took thirty odd years for it to happen. Well done, I enjoyed your prologue, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    Thank you royowen~ a beautiful review.
    I'm glad for the enjoyment go~ of this prologue.
    An encouraging story as well.
reply by royowen on 15-Jun-2019
    Good job
Comment from Raul1
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I how you talk about writing in literature as if it's some kind of hobby or work. It appears to me that writing takes a lot of stress away. Nice work! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
    Thank you Raul1
reply by Raul1 on 13-Jun-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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There is no true sentence structure to follow and the excessive use of the "~" makes things even more confusing.... I do not see an actual plot to follow.... ????

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2019

Comment from jmdg1954
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Knowing our worth, getting around some
Catch it flying
Brown Gold...
ascend on a ladder to Heaven where...???
Is this intentionally left inconclusive? Professional writer?
I am totally lost with this...

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2013

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2013
    Waiting for more~ sensible approaches... shaving and polishing .
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
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CONSIDER:
"...on a ladder to Heaven where.... WHERE WHAT?

A bit too obtuse for this reader. Perhaps a more careful study is in order but on the other hand 'the valuing of organic knowledge' is beyond my capability.

Regards:

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2013

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2013
    Getting around some thanks
reply by STEPHEN A CARTER on 22-Nov-2013
    Dear John: Before publishing a novel go to www.preditorsandeditors.com Avoid vanity presses like Author House. Good luck.

    Cheers: Steve C

    PS: Just posted 2 more short poems in America.