Fairness Matters
In a chaos prone world it helps to be more and more wise2 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
It can be hard sometimes, but in the end leading by example is the way to go. Gandhi had it about right, I think, and the Dali Lama doesn't do a bad job of it either! This is a five for content, not for structure. The 5-7-5 has five syllables in the first line, seven in the second and five in the third. You have written a 7-10-11, so need to shed a few words for the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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It can be hard sometimes, but in the end leading by example is the way to go. Gandhi had it about right, I think, and the Dali Lama doesn't do a bad job of it either! This is a five for content, not for structure. The 5-7-5 has five syllables in the first line, seven in the second and five in the third. You have written a 7-10-11, so need to shed a few words for the contest!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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THANKS.I WILL TRY TO GET THE SIZE RECIPE RIGHT AND RESUBMIT.
Comment from CR Delport
Being fair and humble in every situation is not always possible and takes a great deal of self control. Thanks for sharing these wise words.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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Being fair and humble in every situation is not always possible and takes a great deal of self control. Thanks for sharing these wise words.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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I appreciate your prompt and realism based response.
