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18 total reviews
Comment from 9999pool
Nightmares do come to haunt at times.
Those without such horrifying experiences are lucky.
But nightmares have a way of telling on our well being and sleeping pills are not the answer.
A peaceful and calm mind free of guilt is.
Try to overcome our fears as best as we can in any available means we have and the nightmare will be gone soon hopefully.
Good write and well penned a haunting that many experienced.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :)0
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Nightmares do come to haunt at times.
Those without such horrifying experiences are lucky.
But nightmares have a way of telling on our well being and sleeping pills are not the answer.
A peaceful and calm mind free of guilt is.
Try to overcome our fears as best as we can in any available means we have and the nightmare will be gone soon hopefully.
Good write and well penned a haunting that many experienced.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :)0
Comment Written 18-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Thank you Ritchie. Pleasant dreams.
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Yikes. Wonder where all the nighmares went - must be Freddie on holidays.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment from KG Writes
Treischel I do not have many nightmares (although after having read this, that might change lol). My mother did, though. She would wake us all up screaming. I would rather live with a sleep walker. As to your verse, very well written and composed. Very well done. KG Writes
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Treischel I do not have many nightmares (although after having read this, that might change lol). My mother did, though. She would wake us all up screaming. I would rather live with a sleep walker. As to your verse, very well written and composed. Very well done. KG Writes
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you KG. I appreciate you comments, and sharing your experiences.
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Treischel You are most welcome. Enjoy your Sunday. KG Writes
Comment from ravenblack
Sleep fine more often. Every time you write in free verse, it feels as if you are breaking out of a cage. You go a bit deeper, but still keep elements of form, which I like. Great poem.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Sleep fine more often. Every time you write in free verse, it feels as if you are breaking out of a cage. You go a bit deeper, but still keep elements of form, which I like. Great poem.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you ravenblack. I appreciate the comment.
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of occasional rhyme
good use of questions to intensify the speaker's emotion
You definitely have me convince this guy is feeling tortured and in need of relief :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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excellent use of occasional rhyme
good use of questions to intensify the speaker's emotion
You definitely have me convince this guy is feeling tortured and in need of relief :-) Brooke
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you Brooke. For the great review
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork to complement your poem. I am glad you are sleeping well. A free verse about nightmares, all the way. Mainly alliteration and it sounds nice.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Excellent artwork to complement your poem. I am glad you are sleeping well. A free verse about nightmares, all the way. Mainly alliteration and it sounds nice.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you Ine, and have a good weekend.
Comment from ronnie k
This nightmare spoken in the awesome wording of your poem has been my jailer in the years of addition, I was forced to live in nightmares day and night, no longer but i felt the nightmares memory in this awesome poem, thank you.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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This nightmare spoken in the awesome wording of your poem has been my jailer in the years of addition, I was forced to live in nightmares day and night, no longer but i felt the nightmares memory in this awesome poem, thank you.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you ronnie k, I'm glad you are over them now.
Comment from MzNiki
Great poem with expressive lines.
I was happy to read in the 'Author Notes' that
you are indeed sleeping fine:)
You captured the essence of night terrors and such.
Great contribution, loved your presentation!
Keep up the groovy work (-_-)!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Great poem with expressive lines.
I was happy to read in the 'Author Notes' that
you are indeed sleeping fine:)
You captured the essence of night terrors and such.
Great contribution, loved your presentation!
Keep up the groovy work (-_-)!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you MzNiki for your words of encouragement.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I don't have nightmares, but if I did, I'd hope that weren't to this degree. Very well done. Thanks for the intense poem.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Well, I don't have nightmares, but if I did, I'd hope that weren't to this degree. Very well done. Thanks for the intense poem.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you Ric Myworld.
Comment from Sueellen11
Glad I read your comment,, and you are not having these vivid nightmares,, your poem tells me of a person who suffers from PTSD,,, for I know how many suffer these,, my husband when he was blown up at work,, my brother through all the horrific ate accidents, crimes he attended while being a police officer,, I have seen it before,,great write ,,blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Glad I read your comment,, and you are not having these vivid nightmares,, your poem tells me of a person who suffers from PTSD,,, for I know how many suffer these,, my husband when he was blown up at work,, my brother through all the horrific ate accidents, crimes he attended while being a police officer,, I have seen it before,,great write ,,blessings sueellen
Comment Written 16-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2013
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Thank you Sueellen. Yes, I'm glad I don't get them, but I know some who do.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
Master of free style as well as form. This is superb free style with excellent rhythm and rhyme, figurative language and imagery. The structure is unconventional and effective.
Preston
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
Master of free style as well as form. This is superb free style with excellent rhythm and rhyme, figurative language and imagery. The structure is unconventional and effective.
Preston
Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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Thank you Preston. I try to be flexible. I really appreciate your comments and those stars.
