The Symphony of the Story
Words are our salvation or our death-choose wisely19 total reviews
Comment from Writingfundimension
You have some wonderful alliterative elements, sprinkled with rhyme and lovely imagery. This was an interesting and enjoyable piece to read. I'm not sure why you have it categorized as a script when it feels to be more of an essay-type piece. Anyway, you drew me in with your dramatic flare.
Bev
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
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You have some wonderful alliterative elements, sprinkled with rhyme and lovely imagery. This was an interesting and enjoyable piece to read. I'm not sure why you have it categorized as a script when it feels to be more of an essay-type piece. Anyway, you drew me in with your dramatic flare.
Bev
Comment Written 13-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
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Comment from lancellot
This seems like a bit of run of thoughts put to screen, all about a person who will write what comes to mind and not be forced into a defined pattern. Is this art? Some would say yes. Interesting.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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This seems like a bit of run of thoughts put to screen, all about a person who will write what comes to mind and not be forced into a defined pattern. Is this art? Some would say yes. Interesting.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Comment from Genya
I loved the thoughts and feelings you put into this very creative piece. Everything you wrote is so true. I always feel that my best work is when I can feel it moving inside me. When I read other work it has to move me and then it feels so real. How powerful words are. As a child I would read and read so I could escape the real world and go into a world I loved. As I grew older it was the classics, words from writers around the world. Now I just love reading anything. Words are so powerful and can convey all the senses as well as taking readers into another world. The magic of writing never ceases to amaze me. This was brilliant. A very well deserved six. Genya
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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I loved the thoughts and feelings you put into this very creative piece. Everything you wrote is so true. I always feel that my best work is when I can feel it moving inside me. When I read other work it has to move me and then it feels so real. How powerful words are. As a child I would read and read so I could escape the real world and go into a world I loved. As I grew older it was the classics, words from writers around the world. Now I just love reading anything. Words are so powerful and can convey all the senses as well as taking readers into another world. The magic of writing never ceases to amaze me. This was brilliant. A very well deserved six. Genya
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Comment from JennaJaye
I really enjoyed the scattered embedded rhyming in this offer, for starters. It was a great way to capture my attention (hear the music in it) and read on. Many salient points that I can agree with personally. Substance and nuances will always take top priority in my writes (past a very basic adherence to spelling, grammar, and punctuation for clarity and flow in my stories) because it's the emotions of readers I'm trying to reach before anything else, to get them involved; loved the reference to, for that point exactly, the reader sitting next to the writer. Never have been a traditional formula writer and doubt I ever will be. Excellent thoughts. JJ
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
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I really enjoyed the scattered embedded rhyming in this offer, for starters. It was a great way to capture my attention (hear the music in it) and read on. Many salient points that I can agree with personally. Substance and nuances will always take top priority in my writes (past a very basic adherence to spelling, grammar, and punctuation for clarity and flow in my stories) because it's the emotions of readers I'm trying to reach before anything else, to get them involved; loved the reference to, for that point exactly, the reader sitting next to the writer. Never have been a traditional formula writer and doubt I ever will be. Excellent thoughts. JJ
Comment Written 15-Nov-2014
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Comment from racheal dubois
i was taken away on a flying carpet of words my mind went through countless libraries and book stores and signs and menues and cross word puzzles,soon i was laughing and giggling like a child at disney world. now i want to sit and just right words how many different words do i know? how can i bring them all to together to form the symphony that is my novel, thank you for your poem it was very inspirational.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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i was taken away on a flying carpet of words my mind went through countless libraries and book stores and signs and menues and cross word puzzles,soon i was laughing and giggling like a child at disney world. now i want to sit and just right words how many different words do i know? how can i bring them all to together to form the symphony that is my novel, thank you for your poem it was very inspirational.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
Reading one's work aloud is an important step in self-editing. It especially makes sense if you're a writer who hears the music of the piece and not just the information. Well done. :) nancy
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Reading one's work aloud is an important step in self-editing. It especially makes sense if you're a writer who hears the music of the piece and not just the information. Well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 22-May-2014
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Comment from royowen
I enjoyed this well thought out narrative that seeks out deeper workings of, not only his own mind, and inspiration, but also the meandering thoughts and musing of others, I love how the other peoples minds work, knowing full well I can't not necessarily follow in their imaginative footsteps, but I can but try! I couldn't help myself, I started to muse with you! But that's the way a writer's mind works, it seems! I enjoyed this eloquent. Articulate walk with you, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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I enjoyed this well thought out narrative that seeks out deeper workings of, not only his own mind, and inspiration, but also the meandering thoughts and musing of others, I love how the other peoples minds work, knowing full well I can't not necessarily follow in their imaginative footsteps, but I can but try! I couldn't help myself, I started to muse with you! But that's the way a writer's mind works, it seems! I enjoyed this eloquent. Articulate walk with you, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 20-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thank you. Appreciation is best received when given by the knowing, hearing, feeling, writers that review my writings.
Thank you for your review.
Comment from Righteous Riter
You have said a lot a valid things in this piece but the one thing that stood out to me is your second to last paragraph. I'm not too big on form because I hear that all the time. I thing is the message or substance as you put it. I let my pieces out however they flow out of my heart and that's what makes me happy as a writer but if I can touch someone in a positive way, I'm more happy and giving God all the glory.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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You have said a lot a valid things in this piece but the one thing that stood out to me is your second to last paragraph. I'm not too big on form because I hear that all the time. I thing is the message or substance as you put it. I let my pieces out however they flow out of my heart and that's what makes me happy as a writer but if I can touch someone in a positive way, I'm more happy and giving God all the glory.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2014
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Comment from Brijoyful
Love this!!! "words are the music of the writer"- yes! "words carry the emotions that make a person, laugh, or cry, or be happy..." -so true! And I too am less concerned with punctuation. Great work!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
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Love this!!! "words are the music of the writer"- yes! "words carry the emotions that make a person, laugh, or cry, or be happy..." -so true! And I too am less concerned with punctuation. Great work!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2014
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Comment from Andrar
Hello! You are very passionate about writing and portray that well. I appreciate your use of imagery and your positivity. It is plain that you dislike "form" in poetry, but I think you might benefit from structuring your work differently. As a reader, your line becomes hard to follow when your only infrastructure is the comma. Your voice is very clear but you lack the focus to really make a solid piece; even a little wandering can make a poem lose some of it's impact. Experiment a bit and it will make you a better writer. Good job and keep it up!
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Hello! You are very passionate about writing and portray that well. I appreciate your use of imagery and your positivity. It is plain that you dislike "form" in poetry, but I think you might benefit from structuring your work differently. As a reader, your line becomes hard to follow when your only infrastructure is the comma. Your voice is very clear but you lack the focus to really make a solid piece; even a little wandering can make a poem lose some of it's impact. Experiment a bit and it will make you a better writer. Good job and keep it up!
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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