From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "A Teacher's Prayer"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Walter L. Jones
To walk into the world, to touch the soul, to be a giver of words, to stand before and share, a poet, nay more a man of wisdom, and a writer, well done.. Walt
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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To walk into the world, to touch the soul, to be a giver of words, to stand before and share, a poet, nay more a man of wisdom, and a writer, well done.. Walt
Comment Written 10-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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Walter: thank you so much for your inspiration and encouragement and of course those wonderful six stars!! I'm so very glad to hear from you and hope I can soon return the gifts you've given me!! Vance
Comment from tbacha58
But I know you have a reason for free will
And understand I will make many wrong choices
And perhaps this is your intent for my learning
Yet God, as I age in my deep pool of experiences
It becomes so much harder to swim chasing tiny waves
As a poet, a son, a father, a brother, a lover, a creator and your servant: AMEN
Whoa , Vance , welcome back my very dearest friend that I missed a lot being away. I am so so happy to have you back, Oh Vance, why so sad, you are in turmoil, I wish you all the very best. Beautiful poem , beautiful, but sad, yet its a prayer, and this how prayers should be. May He answers your prayers. Hugs Terry.xxxxx
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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But I know you have a reason for free will
And understand I will make many wrong choices
And perhaps this is your intent for my learning
Yet God, as I age in my deep pool of experiences
It becomes so much harder to swim chasing tiny waves
As a poet, a son, a father, a brother, a lover, a creator and your servant: AMEN
Whoa , Vance , welcome back my very dearest friend that I missed a lot being away. I am so so happy to have you back, Oh Vance, why so sad, you are in turmoil, I wish you all the very best. Beautiful poem , beautiful, but sad, yet its a prayer, and this how prayers should be. May He answers your prayers. Hugs Terry.xxxxx
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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Thanks so much Terry...I have missed you too and appreciate your kindness and your love....all mine is returned to you!! Vance
