To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Dominion's Brief Glory"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from Sankey
A lot of lonely poems mate. I can tell it was a lonely life although I think you said rather than lonely you were a loner and I believe we have that in common as well. No SPags. haha read it again did not realize been here nbefore! Sigh!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013
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A lot of lonely poems mate. I can tell it was a lonely life although I think you said rather than lonely you were a loner and I believe we have that in common as well. No SPags. haha read it again did not realize been here nbefore! Sigh!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013
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Yeah, I was a loner. I socialized and was popular. But, you were just as likely to find me off by myself.
Comment from l.raven
Michael, you should of gotten this in....what a wonderful written...you can just see the leaves falling and the snow setting in...a tree now bare by the seasons...I'm so sorry you didn't get this in...and don't eat McDonalds...they are bad for you...a wonderful write...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Michael, you should of gotten this in....what a wonderful written...you can just see the leaves falling and the snow setting in...a tree now bare by the seasons...I'm so sorry you didn't get this in...and don't eat McDonalds...they are bad for you...a wonderful write...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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I shall eat carrot sticks instead! This was great fun to write and let winter just go crazy for once. ha! Glad you liked it. Look this is a missing Nov. 9 review! mikey
Comment from mickbey
Well, I think there is a good chance you could've won, unfortunately I'm a financially challenged reader who can only offer kudos, but your unique voice makes the poem a lot of fun to read, creative imagery, and there's no doubt about the personification, this 'character' is one I have often cursed, and after listening to what goes thru his crusty, cold, destructive mind, I'm glad,(haha), nice piece of work, can definitely hear the 'voice' of winter.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Well, I think there is a good chance you could've won, unfortunately I'm a financially challenged reader who can only offer kudos, but your unique voice makes the poem a lot of fun to read, creative imagery, and there's no doubt about the personification, this 'character' is one I have often cursed, and after listening to what goes thru his crusty, cold, destructive mind, I'm glad,(haha), nice piece of work, can definitely hear the 'voice' of winter.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Hello! The wonderful review from 11-9 has returned. So pleased to finally be able to respond to this excellent review. I am happy to receive these words of praise in lieu of any monetary rewards! I had the best time letting winter just have his way for once. But, little does he know, spring will win again. ha! Thank you very kindly, mikey
Comment from kenni
I'm glad the old warrior only gets loose once a year. That tree took a shellacking. I noticed lots of good alliteration and imagery. I read it a couple of times and like the way it reads, crescendos to the finale--the victory. I enjoy free verse with such cohesion--a good steady light all the way through. Condolences. kenni
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I'm glad the old warrior only gets loose once a year. That tree took a shellacking. I noticed lots of good alliteration and imagery. I read it a couple of times and like the way it reads, crescendos to the finale--the victory. I enjoy free verse with such cohesion--a good steady light all the way through. Condolences. kenni
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from nancy_e_davis
A very good poem Michael. You have penned a masterpiece in alliteration. You have penned a very good description of winter overcoming fall and taking control. Well done. Nancy
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A very good poem Michael. You have penned a masterpiece in alliteration. You have penned a very good description of winter overcoming fall and taking control. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from CR Delport
Oh Mike, you have such a great sense of humour :). I don't know if this well written poem would've won, but I would've voted for it. Some of these things that win doesn't make any sense.
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Oh Mike, you have such a great sense of humour :). I don't know if this well written poem would've won, but I would've voted for it. Some of these things that win doesn't make any sense.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi Mikey,
This is an excellent poem. I felt the shifting of season, the shriveling of leaves and the bareness of the tree. You truly captured the season that awaits. Burrrr....LOL
Please accept my virtual Big Mac.:) The delicious aroma and mouth watering taste of grease and fat. Two rubberized burgers wedged between white doughy buns with wilted tomatoes, lettuce and their magical sauce(mayonnaise) LOL
Bon Appetit. LOL
Bye
Rosalyne :)
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Hi Mikey,
This is an excellent poem. I felt the shifting of season, the shriveling of leaves and the bareness of the tree. You truly captured the season that awaits. Burrrr....LOL
Please accept my virtual Big Mac.:) The delicious aroma and mouth watering taste of grease and fat. Two rubberized burgers wedged between white doughy buns with wilted tomatoes, lettuce and their magical sauce(mayonnaise) LOL
Bon Appetit. LOL
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from nelliesellie
I love your author notes The poem stood a good chance of being a winner. But donations I have none. I like your grumpy old winter. He is kind of cruel .He strips the victims and freezes their bones. Great work.
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I love your author notes The poem stood a good chance of being a winner. But donations I have none. I like your grumpy old winter. He is kind of cruel .He strips the victims and freezes their bones. Great work.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from Sueellen11
Yes Micky,, this would have made them work for the contest prize,,, yes a pity you dint get it in ,in tie,, a winner for m,, love your moments,,, can we share the McDonald's vouchers,,hee hee,, great write,,blessings,,sueellen
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Yes Micky,, this would have made them work for the contest prize,,, yes a pity you dint get it in ,in tie,, a winner for m,, love your moments,,, can we share the McDonald's vouchers,,hee hee,, great write,,blessings,,sueellen
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
Comment from RedGryffyn
Great job. I liked the flow and the description. It is very poetic and deep. It flows well and is well paced. It is written flawlessly. Thank you for sharing and too bad you missed the contest. It would have been a top contender.
Red Gryffyn
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Great job. I liked the flow and the description. It is very poetic and deep. It flows well and is well paced. It is written flawlessly. Thank you for sharing and too bad you missed the contest. It would have been a top contender.
Red Gryffyn
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
