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Comment from marycec
Good use of alliteration in,'what watched in woods' and ' stump silently stands' I enjoyed the pun of its bark doesn't bite. I am learning so much about different forms via your notes. Clever combination in this poem.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Good use of alliteration in,'what watched in woods' and ' stump silently stands' I enjoyed the pun of its bark doesn't bite. I am learning so much about different forms via your notes. Clever combination in this poem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Thank you Mary, glad you appreciate my notes and formats.
Comment from rod007
Very interesting and the picture is amazing. I can see how you got the inspiration to write this piece. I especially liked this verse:
"Little woodland sprite
is watching both day and night
security's tight"
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Very interesting and the picture is amazing. I can see how you got the inspiration to write this piece. I especially liked this verse:
"Little woodland sprite
is watching both day and night
security's tight"
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you rod for a wonderful review.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
You have such a mastery of poetic form
you should publish a theory book on
poetic style.
Clever and well written .
I so enjoy your mastery and talent.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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You have such a mastery of poetic form
you should publish a theory book on
poetic style.
Clever and well written .
I so enjoy your mastery and talent.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you Shirley. I appreciate your enthusiasm.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
It does look like the tree has eyes. Neat picture. Nature does the most amazing things, doesn't it? I love to make shapes out of things, I still do with the clouds. This is well done and really fun. Rox
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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It does look like the tree has eyes. Neat picture. Nature does the most amazing things, doesn't it? I love to make shapes out of things, I still do with the clouds. This is well done and really fun. Rox
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you Rox.
Comment from Dean Kuch
hah, cool poem, Mr. 'T'! The first thing I thought of when I looked at your intriguing photograph was that it reminded me of a gigantic chameleon. Those bulging, ever-swiveling eyes have always fascinated me in their design and movements.
Then, for some reason after I read your unique, but wonderful, poem, the Cheshire Cat from Alice in Wonderland came to mid. I don't know HOW that thought sneaked in there, LOL...
Nicely done! (As usual...)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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hah, cool poem, Mr. 'T'! The first thing I thought of when I looked at your intriguing photograph was that it reminded me of a gigantic chameleon. Those bulging, ever-swiveling eyes have always fascinated me in their design and movements.
Then, for some reason after I read your unique, but wonderful, poem, the Cheshire Cat from Alice in Wonderland came to mid. I don't know HOW that thought sneaked in there, LOL...
Nicely done! (As usual...)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you Dean. I can relate with all those thoughts.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Little woodland sprite 'l' and 't' allits
is watching day and night Omit 'both'
security's tight
What watched in the woods, Use 'wood' 'w' allits
from fields of this land, 'f' "
dismissed where it stood, All those s's
stump silently stands,
feet fixed in the sand. 'F' allits
Its bark doesn't bite. 'b' "
Might be surprised,
you'll be in sight
of bulging eyes.
To obey
Nature's way
many say,
when spied
outside,
hide.
Interesting concept. The last 5 lines are a bit too obtuse for me.
Regards:
This spirit of tree
Can't easily flee.
When safety applies,
It closes its eyes.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Little woodland sprite 'l' and 't' allits
is watching day and night Omit 'both'
security's tight
What watched in the woods, Use 'wood' 'w' allits
from fields of this land, 'f' "
dismissed where it stood, All those s's
stump silently stands,
feet fixed in the sand. 'F' allits
Its bark doesn't bite. 'b' "
Might be surprised,
you'll be in sight
of bulging eyes.
To obey
Nature's way
many say,
when spied
outside,
hide.
Interesting concept. The last 5 lines are a bit too obtuse for me.
Regards:
This spirit of tree
Can't easily flee.
When safety applies,
It closes its eyes.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thank you Stephen.
Comment from Capricorn30
Excellent!
Three formats to create a well-crafted dedication to woodland wonderment;
Nice alliteration incorporated into a fine personification of the mighty trees.
A pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Excellent!
Three formats to create a well-crafted dedication to woodland wonderment;
Nice alliteration incorporated into a fine personification of the mighty trees.
A pleasure to read.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much Margaret.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from annehyacinth
Loved the poem.. Especially how the poem is beginning with "watching" and ending with, "closes it's eyes". Also, loved how you have framed, "it's bark doesn't bite".
Good job :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Loved the poem.. Especially how the poem is beginning with "watching" and ending with, "closes it's eyes". Also, loved how you have framed, "it's bark doesn't bite".
Good job :)
Comment Written 05-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thank you annehyacinth.
