Little Mouse
Trick or Treat81 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Your grand daughter is so so so so precious :-) I just want to kiss both of those cheeks :-)
solid rhyming couplets
good internal rhyme in mouse at my house
love the pairing of critique and cheek, which has me laughing because I told you I wanted to kiss her cheeks before I scrolled down to read this :-)
How totally adorable :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Your grand daughter is so so so so precious :-) I just want to kiss both of those cheeks :-)
solid rhyming couplets
good internal rhyme in mouse at my house
love the pairing of critique and cheek, which has me laughing because I told you I wanted to kiss her cheeks before I scrolled down to read this :-)
How totally adorable :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Poetry doesn't come natural for me so I really struggle. I know all lines have 5 syllables except one, it has six, but I liked the line so I left it.
